Knowest My Secrets

A Romantic poem for the girl i love......

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For now thy shall read my feelings,

Knowest my secrets, promise me this,

My dearest friend.

That whatever thy now shall read,

Will strengthen our friendship, however thy will think of my feelings.

And not breaketh it down, like the wind blows the sand, but shall stand, like the rock standeth in the face of the fearsome wind.

That first look, that glimpse of your face,

Gave me the strength to embrace.

Thy friendship is my strength,

Thy beauty my inspiration.

For thee, and thee only,

I write this poem:

For my mind hesitates me,

But my heart draws me to thee.

Thy eyes shine like those of an Angel,

When they meet mine, I get flowed over by thy passion of thy Angel girl.

Thy slender figure, oh so magnificent,

Thouest golden hair adding to thy eternal Beauty.

If thouest ever thy friend so Love,

Tell me now, oh please,

For I Truly Love thee

(oh, for true it is,

And not just sweet talk,

I DO, I Truly Love thee)

Author's Note

I am 15 years old, if you were wondering, no joke!

Reviews

[M.S. Wiley]

Great work. I used to dread Shakespearian dialect, but this is really charming. :)

[Astrid Hamilton]

Whoever you have written this to is listening, somewhere in the universe, with what you speaketh are her angel eyes and golden hair;
tresses flowing as she walks, I'm sure she thinks of you, too.
You are a young poet, and these words speak beyond wisdom the hgeart has ever gained thr0ough the complete companionship of love, and age is ageless with no factor in its course.

It is a most beautiful love letter, and you have been heard, and felt.

[Haley Smith]

Awww! This is a very sweet and well-written poem. I love the Shakespearean theme you've got going; I'm sure you've made his spirit proud with this one. Put up your other poems quick; I can't wait to read them! Write on :)

-Haley

[John Stussy]

What gal wouldn't love to have a poem like this written for her? Nice Shakespearean style, keep up the good work.

[FANTASYKNIGHT]

I just started doing Shakespeare, and since i can review, i think it's preety good, i don't brag of myself, it's not a masterpiece, so there you go.....