A Beauty that so shines

This will always be true. So amazing she is, only the poem could descride her.

A Beauty that echoes,
yet invisible to sight.
like an eagle it soars,
glowing on a moonlit night.

 

A beauty so mystical,
unseen by blinded eyes.
Reflecting your magnificance,
a cue for the sun to rise.

 

Abeatuy that so shines,
To blind all in it's presence.
Yet I am not blinded,
entranced by it's essence.

 

Such a beauty like this,
only a few will ever see.
this fortune fate brought,
to befall unto me.

 

Only a person like you,
could ever posess.
Beauty so magical,
My dear princess.

Author's Note

no comment, emmotions took control...

Reviews

[Annique le Roux]

a cue for the sun to rise. .....ah wow...
goosebumps...that all i can say :)
well done

[Adelia Alighieri]

Aww...I loved the poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wonder what beauty made you write this..It's so beautiful!!

[FantasyPrincess]

wow,this is beauttiful. what made you write something like this?

[Bamber AKA. AM-HAM]

I love it, it's unique, and the wording makes you shiver

[FANTASYKNIGHT]

Pure Beauty tempted me. thats probably all I could say...

[~IlOvEcHrIsToPhErBuRnEt..]

that was really romantic.....where do you come up with stuff like this?

[Servant Ties]

I loved it....the emotions went through me so fast. If I may ask what tempted you to write this?

[Ebs]

awww. what a beautiful poem. It was very sweet and rolled off the tongue. Mistake though in the third stanza you didn't take a space between A and beauty.

ebs