Mistaken

Mistaken

A Poem by Solidad
"

There isn't always bliss in ignorance.

"
Stuck between love
and
what if?
I
should know
better
then to
cry
over spilled milk
yet
I remain
old enough to
know better
and stupid enough
to try.

© 2011 Solidad


Author's Note

Solidad
Dedicated to the biggest mistake I've yet to make.

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cheers to "new" mistakes...because we are all going to make them - live and learn is all i have learned...every person shows and expects expressions of love differently - can't go back and say who was my "greatest" love or "biggest" mistake because they were all necessary -

great insight that is a form of simple concentration to provoke more thought



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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There is not one of us here that has not made a mistake or two or three or four. But this was beautiful put, love your outlook and your vision of things. xoxoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes that is the point that we know better but we are stupid enough to try with hopes of a different out come. I am that stupid person but too me trying can be worth it until it ends the same as before that is.

This poem feels comfortable me I know how it feels to be stuck like this and I know how hard it is to decide what to do.

:P Loved the write and the style of the poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cheers to "new" mistakes...because we are all going to make them - live and learn is all i have learned...every person shows and expects expressions of love differently - can't go back and say who was my "greatest" love or "biggest" mistake because they were all necessary -

great insight that is a form of simple concentration to provoke more thought



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderful write and your author's note is awesome all by itself.......dedicated to the biggest mistake I've yet to make.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great write! "old enough to know better and stupid enough to try." Love this. It's true in many situations.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You write with jarring emotions.
This really shook me up.....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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