Mr. & Mrs.

To my husband Joel, to you forever from me to you.

Breathe me.
Even as my bones refuse you.

Pull back my veil and graze my kindred spirit,
As I wrap my heart around your name.

Enveloping a stoic bliss,
You brush your fingertips down my sternum.

Hurt no more as I kiss your eyelids,
a token of my affection.

Bound by trust,
even as angels speak through floods.

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

Yes I agree with the others this one is dripping with the beauty of love's touch, love has a flair to make us whimsical in it's presence. :P

[TJ]

This is another beautiful piece. It's amazing the way you construct your work and the word choices you use so that in so few words you communicate so much

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Soli, I wish I had the words to use to describe how beautiful this was. Awww to be in love... What a wonderous feeling. You expressed it so well. xo

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Oh wow! Solidad, this is love depicted in just a few words. I could feel it as I read.....beautiful!

[Alicia Hirshey]

I agree, This is a glimpse of love at its finest.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

intimate glimpse of true love~

[Ed Hart]

tender, private, beautiful

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem makes me want to just dawn armor...
take up my claymore...mount my trusty steed..
and ride valiantly into battle......

To fight for love!