Jorge

Dedicated to a friend whom love has treated terribly. This one is for you G.R.

Walking he drags behind him
a once taunt crimson thread,

attached
like a shackle.

Hoping one day
she'll come back;

and love him
like she use to.

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

Aw lost love and desiring to reclaim it with one we are still in love with. Not a good feeling, or situation to be in. Sweet is your pen to write this for him/her.

[Perception Shapes Poetr..]

is it love treating terribly or love liberating to find a greater sense of respect and love for self? - i would never want to turn back - i say good riddens - love your style though!

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Great sense of longing and loss. Nicely penned, I'm impressed.xx

[Neva Flores - Changeful..]

It is so hard to see someone who holds on to love this way, especially when the love is not returned and probably never will be. You want to see them live again bu there is nothing you can do. XX Well penned

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

My heart goes out to this guy. I wish him the best.
I believe him to be a good person. This poem vouches for his character.

[Chris G. Vaillancourt]

Very good work

[DespondentDreamer]

this is curiously interesting.. all with its hidden aspects and notions..