Sunshine Disco

Collection of faces and shades

Far away from the dancing spades

Thunder comes as gentle as rain

Relaxation and calm take over the brain

Great gray mountains in the sky

An immaculate golden light show

A sunshine disco as they pass on by 

Erratic rays dance within the foreseen flow

Iridescent shores laden with molten silver

Who is this guest that roams our land

Enjoy this purlieu, lest deciding to pilfer

Join our gambol, enrich our shining sand

Replace our graying skies

As Apollo replaced Helios

Make peace with the gloom and say your goodbyes

The sun is here to stay 

Reviews

[Kelsey Ann]

Beautiful poem! I like the adjectives you used too, very pretty! :D

[Jqjohnson]

Thank you very much :)

[iNSOMniAC]

I loved the poem by itself, but by including Greek mythology, you just made this five times better. xD
Great work!

[Jqjohnson]

Thanks, I hated mythology when I was in school so it's funny how I've come around to it

[Corset]

This poem sounds a lot like my day today, it was so beautiful here the sunlight seemed to dance, anyone who uses words like purlieu deserves to be read often. This is a gorgeous write. I especially enjoyed all of it, lol, the last stanza just freaking made me "feel" the elation :)

[Jqjohnson]

I'm glad the sun is finally coming back and warming us up! Thank you for the review