Scream

Scream

A Story by JulianaSun
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For the "ten words horror story."

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The demon slowly ripped him to pieces from inside out.

© 2015 JulianaSun


Author's Note

JulianaSun
First time to wwrite something like this :) I like it.

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I like this poem because it doesn't strike me as something physical. It sounds like a personal issue, perhaps anxiety or some internal dilemma. It starts inside, in the chest and in the head, before it begins to show on the body - under our eyes, by the fatigue. Good work. Keep it up.

SLOVA

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JulianaSun

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review, and for reading. Yes, it can have two meanings. One literal - it is just a sh.. read more



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I like it too! Short but yet so full and deep.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hanir

8 Years Ago

Still you nailed it! You're just so talented!
JulianaSun

8 Years Ago

Wow, please don´t flatter me so :)
hanir

8 Years Ago

Just stating a fact! 😉
Good job!! you deserved first place!! I like it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JulianaSun

8 Years Ago

Thanks :) I´m glad you liked it.
I enjoyed the duality of its interpretation. The vision of a physical demon forcing its way to the surface and the image of the internal demon's victory.

Posted 8 Years Ago


JulianaSun

8 Years Ago

I had no duality in mind when writing it, but afterwards the little lightbulb above my head lit up :.. read more
wow! the darkness is excellently reflected in this deep brevity! Congrats on your trophy!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JulianaSun

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Indra! Darkness is my specialty :)

J
Indra Neil

8 Years Ago

u r welcome! dark poetry is one of my favorite category!
I like this poem because it doesn't strike me as something physical. It sounds like a personal issue, perhaps anxiety or some internal dilemma. It starts inside, in the chest and in the head, before it begins to show on the body - under our eyes, by the fatigue. Good work. Keep it up.

SLOVA

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JulianaSun

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review, and for reading. Yes, it can have two meanings. One literal - it is just a sh.. read more

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Added on July 19, 2015
Last Updated on July 19, 2015
Tags: dark, demon


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