Winter

Winter

A Poem by MsJewel
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a romantic fantasy

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art ~ winter goddess by Charlene maguire

 

 

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Gather cool winds around her

and shake her silken hair

weaving the beams of moonlight

and he shall feel her there

 

Falling in mists and shadows

haunting the darkest night

twirling with grace she whispers

melodies soft and light

 

Filling the sky above him

with pale white innocence

and he can feel her spirit

drifting with elegance

 

Drawing him in the blanket

that sweeps her ivory bed

wrapping his heart in splendor

into her dreams he’s led

 

“Dance my love, just snowflakes

in this white wonderland

Float with me on fantasies

come love, take my hand”

 

Dressing his eyes with beauty

 shimmers of diamond glow

crown her head with lilies

yet in the night below…

 

The roses chill and wither

at her touch, icy cold

If he could make just one wish

If he could be so bold

 

To gather cool winds around her

warm her beauty pale and fair

and drift with her to springtime 

and still....to feel her there

~~~

© 2014 MsJewel


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To gather cool winds around her

warm her beauty pale and fair

and drift with her to springtime

and still....to feel her there

lovely lines. ! hugs !
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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Anand. Happy New Year my friend. Hugs, Julie



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Wonderful. Makes one wish for winter. Elegant and fills my soul. Thank you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Stunning romantic fantasy.
Enjoyed every fairy tale image and stories of it.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful comment :) Julie
zainul

10 Years Ago

You are always welcome,smiling poet.:)
Winter personified in female form...splendid! Also love the artwork..fits the piece perfectly! Beautiful Julie!! ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
I hope your winter is much fairer than mine, I just got done clearing a foot of snow from my drive and sidewalks... But, if I could feel the essence of this poem while working on the snow, I think I would have been much warmer. I love the last verse as it takes the cold into the blossoming warmth of springtime.
And I would feel her there...

Very Beautiful poetry my friend, Trace

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

We are down to 28 degrees at night here at the beach...it feels like snow...I can't wait for spring!.. read more
Pryde Foltz

10 Years Ago

Way colder up north. Was minus six celsius the other night, which for Vancouver is crazy cold.
MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Stay warm Pryde!
well Julie this one flowed really well...into her dreams he`s led is my favorite verse
we know that we are led lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Ron. Hugs, Julie
Amazing.. piece of art! great flow and rhyme.. Will be reading more of your work, so beautiful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review Johanna. I look forward to reading your poetry :) Julie
Beautiful presentation! Your poems always flow with such a softness, with such a grace like a creek in an enchanted meadow... somewhere, where the horizon meets the heaven..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

I am touched by your wonderful comment and compliment. Thank you. :) Julie
Wonderful rhyming and rhythm. Great job! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you! :) Julie
To gather cool winds around her
warm her beauty pale and fair
and drift with her to springtime
and still....to feel her there

So pretty and enchanting.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Pryde! :) Julie
Beautiful it's simple and sweet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you! :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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