Heart Prints

Heart Prints

A Poem by MsJewel
"

~ missing someone special ~

"

art ~ Lluis Ribas

 

 

There are no footsteps left

only mine

            wandering through memories

 

wondering why

after five years

                       three days

                                      and nine hours

                      the flowers still bloom without you…

 

       heart prints


© 2013 MsJewel



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O' Mah Gosh! What the haven is this!
This write's so filled with peace and memories. The emotions, the past love, the cold breeze, the heart beat everything's well penned into the poem... and that's all what I damn loved to read.

Thanks for penning this marvelous piece with your scent that's of course made this write beautiful and enjoyable reading :)
Once again 100/100 Rating!

Your really damn cool!


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend. This is one of my favorites as well, written for my mother. Hugs, Julie



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This is lovely, sweet, and sad. I especially like the way you broke up your lines for emphasis. Beautifully done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
A velvety soft lamentation.....straight from your heart. So much said in so few words, Julie. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi. I had a feeling you could relate to this one. Have a beautiful day my friend. :) Ju.. read more
O' Mah Gosh! What the haven is this!
This write's so filled with peace and memories. The emotions, the past love, the cold breeze, the heart beat everything's well penned into the poem... and that's all what I damn loved to read.

Thanks for penning this marvelous piece with your scent that's of course made this write beautiful and enjoyable reading :)
Once again 100/100 Rating!

Your really damn cool!


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend. This is one of my favorites as well, written for my mother. Hugs, Julie
A sad and strong description of someone missed. Funny how time is important. A day with sad meaning leave us with the need to hear a missed voice and face. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful comment. Have a beautiful day! :) Julie
There are no footsteps left

only mine

wandering through memories

wonderfully wandered :)
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Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you. Happy Holidays! :) Julie
Hmmm,heart melting! This poem has the power to melt stone hearts.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your very sweet comment. :) Julie
A very moving piece Ms. Jewel! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Cody :) Julie
This was a very enjoyable poem, Jewel. You've captured an extraordinary amount of time spent longing in only a few words. That is excellent. While reading work, I sometimes wonder why it takes some writers so long to express an idea that could be done succinctly. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful comment Mary. There is a poet on this site Kelly Scheppers who writes .. read more
Amazing poem! So heartfelt! Even when you describe sadness, you do it beautifully. And every word is so true.........! That person must be so dear to you.
I loved it Julie!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I wrote this for my mother Pushkar. I miss her everyday. She loved to garden and loved flowers - r.. read more
Pushkar Prabhat

3 Years Ago

Oh! I can relate to that........i feel so sorry for you.......and yes, holidays are never the same w.. read more
I feel your emtiom julie. Nice work


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie

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MsJewel

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