Snowflake Wishes

Snowflake Wishes

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ still no snow at the beach ~

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Art ~ compliments of myopera

 

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I hung my hope upon a star

in skies of midnight blue

As winter rose and snowflakes fell

the star, my wish, it flew!

 

Lie still, lie still, my hopeful heart

as the sky began to glow

in flecks of light, so pure and white

Lie still, but let it snow

 

I dreamt a dream so full of hope

where a wish, it came true

I woke to a white wonderland

The star, my wish, it grew!

~~~

© 2013 MsJewel


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So lovely, MsJewel. We must never give up on a dream or desire we hold dear. For to give up on it is, in a sense, to cease living and to cease feeling fully alive. Very, very well done, my friend. And I hope to post something this weekend. I've been a slacker as of late:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Rebecca. Happy New Year! :) Julie
Rebecca Buller

10 Years Ago

You're welcome, and Happy New Year to you too:) :)



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Snow, stars, a hopeful heart, what more could one ask for, always a pleasure to read you Julie, this is enchanting. Happy New Year my sweet friend. x

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Happy New Year Frieda! It's wonderful to see you! :) Julie
Wonderful imagery! This poem is hauntingly beautiful, and weaves a powerful theme about resilience and a firm grasp of dreams, hopes, and wishes. Great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you! :) Julie
Gleb Zavlanov

10 Years Ago

No problem. Your work truly is stunning.
MsJewel

10 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you!
So lovely, MsJewel. We must never give up on a dream or desire we hold dear. For to give up on it is, in a sense, to cease living and to cease feeling fully alive. Very, very well done, my friend. And I hope to post something this weekend. I've been a slacker as of late:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Rebecca. Happy New Year! :) Julie
Rebecca Buller

10 Years Ago

You're welcome, and Happy New Year to you too:) :)
Come to Michigan. Rain and snow is no problem. When I was station in Monterey. I didn't miss the snow. I like the poem. Winter does have it beauty. A good sled and a big hill. Fun for the family. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

I used to spend Thanksgiving in Minnesota every year. I do miss the snow, but I guess it is differe.. read more
This is absolutely beautiful, pleasant to read, and just sings with hopefulness. A wish upon a star and a wish come true - beautiful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Linda. I appreciate your very kind comment :) Julie
"Never give up on your dreams" is the message I received from your wonderful poem, Julie. Velvety soft and tinged with a perfumed innocence.....just so very lovely! The rhyming and meter are absolute perfection and the persentation is gorgeous. Julie, as always, your work is super! Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment Lydi! I have missed you and your gorgeous poetry. I can't wait to.. read more
I love this piece MS the imagery is light and flurry like snow softly falling on that clear dark night, just like a tinkle of a bell, amazing.


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Jane. I appreciate your kind comment :) Julie
jane7z

10 Years Ago

You are welcome MS.
This is absolutely beautiful I loved it. ... breath taking ...

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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Great Picture, Great Colours for the text and the star.

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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by and leaving a copy. I appreciate it very much :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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