You...

You...

A Poem by MsJewel
"

~ another little love poem ~

"

 

photograph compliments of pinterest

 

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In a black and white existence

of narrow roads

and straight lines

you have me twirling

in paisley painted days

and red lipstick nights

 

Inspirational…perhaps

 

but one thing is certain

 

You

color my world

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© 2013 MsJewel



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wow Julie, paisley painted days and red lipstick nights, simply delicious and colorfully rich in... in.. "sighs", if you don't mind my saying, your poetry colors my (everyones) life... who would want narrow roads or straight lines ever again... not me. thanks Julie for a wonderful start to my day. ~~redzone

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for a wonderful start to my day Curt! Happy New Year my friend. :) Julie



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Amazing!!!
So beautiful and romantic!
I loved it!
:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thanks again :) Julie
wow!!!!! very lovely romantic poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Cassie. Thank you :) Julie
Scrumptiously written! A delight to read!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Gleb! :) Julie
dear Julie.. hot and sassy... Where is my saxophone?!!
to make this a celebration in art and poetry. truly... Pat

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I didn't know you played Pat! Happy New Year my sweet friend. Hugs, Julie
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

Hi Julie... When My son was fifteen (now 43), I
bought a wonderful saxophone at a yard sale <.. read more
Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry. Good to have someone to make your world come alive with color and hope. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful day! :) Julie
Well he colors your, he discolored mine :| (jiggles) I'm fine, I just liked it very much !

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I'm so glad Valerie. Thank you! :) Julie
Valeriya Nahirnyak

3 Years Ago

You're very welcome! (:
OK, it is official. I am in love - I mean in love - with that picture. O-M-G! Like wow.

And then your poem... Julie, I am so super jealous of you write now.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I had the same reaction when I found the picture. I knew I had to write something to go with it. I'm.. read more
your poem is as brilliant as the inspiration for the photo. both compliments each other.

very nice,

Trace

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend. You color my world. Hugs, Julie
zapped me with the hues of this poem...

love can color a black and white world for sure...exuberant colors of feeling here.
nicely expressed...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob! :) Julie
A very sweet poem Julie! You've got some real beautiful imagery going on here.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thanks again Trevor. :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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