You...

~ another little love poem ~

 

photograph compliments of pinterest

 

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In a black and white existence

of narrow roads

and straight lines

you have me twirling

in paisley painted days

and red lipstick nights

 

Inspirational…perhaps

 

but one thing is certain

 

You

color my world

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Reviews

[redzone]

wow Julie, paisley painted days and red lipstick nights, simply delicious and colorfully rich in... in.. "sighs", if you don't mind my saying, your poetry colors my (everyones) life... who would want narrow roads or straight lines ever again... not me. thanks Julie for a wonderful start to my day. ~~redzone

[MsJewel]

Thank you for a wonderful start to my day Curt! Happy New Year my friend. :) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

Cool photo, great poem. It's the total package. You're in the big leagues now kid.

[MsJewel]

Thank you BR! :) Julie

[Rebecca Buller]

"Red lipstick nights," ooh-la-la! Your poetry is a work of art and the photo you posted is simply magnificent:) Perfection!!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment Rebecca. Happy New Year my friend :) Julie

[Tom]

The sensual imagery and the message quite literally suffuses through to the very soul !

An imbuing, poetic write Ms Jewel !

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Tom. Happy New Year! :) Julie

[Tom]

And the same to you Julie.....

[Lydia Shutter]

"Lipstick nights" love the sound of that and the images it conjures! The colorful nature of this write goes far beyond the obvious adjectives. When a person brings color into your world, he is a keeper for sure. Great work, Julie. A keeper for me. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your wonderful comment Lydi! Happy New Year my friend! :) Julie

[Frieda P]

Oh geez Julie, this is just perfect, I love red lipstick and paisley brings back fond memories. You color my world with your sweet poetry girl! Have a grand New Year. :-)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Frieda. I appreciate you and your friendship. Happy New Year! :) Julie

[Frieda P]

As I do yours Julie, always a pleasure to read you.

[MAC]

adore your little love poems!

I have a thing for red, poems that manage to fit it in just seem more sensual.

the imagery is perfect....comes across as very visual and wanting.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Mark! Red is a very passionate color - one of my favs! :) Julie

[R. L. Hill]

I enjoy the idea of this. "Red lipstick nights".

[MsJewel]

We have to break out that red lipstick every now and then - ya know? Hugs, Julie

[Leigh]

You found your Peacock with his mighty spread of feathers, very well expressed, great poem.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Leigh! :) Julie

[Solilokiss]

Intricately expressed, fave poetess!

[MsJewel]

You are so kind. Thank you for your wonderful comment :) Julie