Sunsets of Me and You

Sunsets of Me and You

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a romantic little scribble ~

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art ~ razmov konstantin

 

The beauty

of your kiss

lingers

as warm, as sweet

as a sunset

weaving the sky with ribbons of crimson red passion

            tied softly around my heart…

 

Your lips

compose beautiful ballads

to paint the sky

as the moon waits

for starlight’s dance

and the breeze whispers of love

                 your love

 

Gather this breeze, love

gather me

until skies ignite

and I surrender

to one more kiss…

 

        content

               sharing sunsets of me and you

 

 

                   


© 2014 MsJewel



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I love your poetry, Julie, it is entrancing and always leaves me smiling. It's hard to decide which lines to quote, but the ones that struck me first were:

as warm, as sweet
as a sunset
weaving the sky with ribbons of crimson red passion
tied softly around my heart…

So very beautiful . . .

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

4 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoy my poetry Joyce. I'm a fan of yours as well. I appreciate you and your frien.. read more



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The sun, a breeze and a kiss. So simple and so absolutely priceless.

Posted 2 Years Ago


An enchanting surrender, just lovely!

Posted 2 Years Ago


I really really love this romantic scribble and have gotten swept off by it. Totally on.point

Posted 2 Years Ago


a treat for a fan!
i just love your poems.
:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your very kind comment :) Julie
Wow. This is so good I had to add it to my library. I absolutely love it! Keep up the good work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

You are very kind Rachel. Thank you :) Julie
Rachel Anderson

3 Years Ago

You're welcome, Julie!
Amazing. I love this poem a lot.
The way or I must say the theme used to express love is excellent.
It is an artistic way of expressing your feelings.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your very kind comments. I look forward to reading your poetry :) Julie
You always bring an idyllic feel to your writing...your romantic works are innocent but assertive as well, like fairy tales for an older audience. Great work Julie :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie
Did you pick the photo then write about it? I sometimes find inspiration in many forms.=)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

No, I wrote the poem first, but I love this artist. :) Julie
very romantic and beautiful...well done

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you! :) Julie
My heart melts at the romance of this poem. To chose a line would be catastrophically wrong when the entirety is so powerfully given.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment ) Julie

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Tags: romance, love, kiss, passion, sunset, moon, stars, msjewel, poetry

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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