Sunsets of Me and You

~ a romantic little scribble ~

art ~ razmov konstantin

 

The beauty

of your kiss

lingers

as warm, as sweet

as a sunset

weaving the sky with ribbons of crimson red passion

            tied softly around my heart…

 

Your lips

compose beautiful ballads

to paint the sky

as the moon waits

for starlight’s dance

and the breeze whispers of love

                 your love

 

Gather this breeze, love

gather me

until skies ignite

and I surrender

to one more kiss…

 

        content

               sharing sunsets of me and you

 

 

                   

Reviews

[Joyce S. Greene]

I love your poetry, Julie, it is entrancing and always leaves me smiling. It's hard to decide which lines to quote, but the ones that struck me first were:

as warm, as sweet
as a sunset
weaving the sky with ribbons of crimson red passion
tied softly around my heart…

So very beautiful . . .

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoy my poetry Joyce. I'm a fan of yours as well. I appreciate you and your friendship. :) Julie

[Trevor Barnett]

Very romantic Julie to compare a relationship to a sunset is so beautiful. Very well done!

[MsJewel]

Thanks again Trevor :) Julie

[ron]

Gather this breeze, love
gather me
until skies ignite
and I surrender
to one more kiss…

content
sharing sunsets of me and you

One of the most beautiful poems I have read MsJewel.

[MsJewel]

I'm humbled by your wonderful comment. You have made my day. Thank you. :) Julie

[ron]

You are most welcome Julie. :)

[Laura Harrison]

Captivating and beautiful, as always :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. :) Julie

[redflutterby]

Surrender to one more kiss....sigh....

Lovely...sweet and sensual Julie...as always!!;-)

~Red~

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment :) Julie

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is really beautiful and well done. Extremely romantic. Thank you for sharing.

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sharing those ballads, beautiful, romantic...a kiss of sensuality with nature's lips matching theirs.

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Jacob! :) Julie

[Sasha]

"Gather this breeze, love
gather me
until skies ignite
and I surrender
to one more kiss…"

Amazing !

[MsJewel]

Thank you Sasha! :) Julie

[Sasha]

your most welcome :)

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Beautifully painted! I can feel the warm sunset of love upon my cheek. Exceptional to say the least!

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thanks again. :) Julie

[s y e]

Oh so romantic, mademoiselle. I loved the imagery and description. Always so well written as usual.

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie