Sunsets of Me and You

~ a romantic little scribble ~

art ~ razmov konstantin

 

The beauty

of your kiss

lingers

as warm, as sweet

as a sunset

weaving the sky with ribbons of crimson red passion

            tied softly around my heart…

 

Your lips

compose beautiful ballads

to paint the sky

as the moon waits

for starlight’s dance

and the breeze whispers of love

                 your love

 

Gather this breeze, love

gather me

until skies ignite

and I surrender

to one more kiss…

 

        content

               sharing sunsets of me and you

 

 

                   

Reviews

[Joyce S. Greene]

I love your poetry, Julie, it is entrancing and always leaves me smiling. It's hard to decide which lines to quote, but the ones that struck me first were:

as warm, as sweet
as a sunset
weaving the sky with ribbons of crimson red passion
tied softly around my heart…

So very beautiful . . .

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoy my poetry Joyce. I'm a fan of yours as well. I appreciate you and your friendship. :) Julie

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Beautiful... the voice of this was soft and inviting, well done.

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[adreamer]

Another very beautiful dedication to the one that will always hold your heart in a very special place you have an incredible talent in showing your feelings for someone in your writing. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie

[Valeigh Starr]

This is beautiful. I love the sunset/night sky imagery!

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful. I'm a a flutter. Do you know how hard that is to do?

[MsJewel]

You are so sweet. Thank you BR :) Julie

[Weeping Angel]

you are an amazing writer. when i have kids, they will study your work in their textbooks.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you for the wonderful comment and compliment. :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

The breeze feels your love, the skies are on fire with passion and desire, and the sky lights up in a magnificent landscape of color. What splendid imagery you employ in this one, Julie. The romance is dancing on the page. So very lovely. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi! :) Julie

[Raymond Federle]

Sweet and warm. Hmmm... Why do I always think of food when I read your poems??!!? LOL Very well done. :)

[MsJewel]

Sweet and warm food. .... sounds yummy to me! :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

Wow Julie... this is delicious...
so delicate and sensuous..
sunsets melting into night...
a kiss in ribbons of delight.
Bravo... a favorite...
truly... Pat

[MsJewel]

You are so sweet Pat - thank you for supporting my poetry. I appreciate you! :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

That was one hell of a kiss Jules lol.As all your work are so breathtaking and vivid and absolutely perfect :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your wonderful comment and compliment. Have a beautiful day! :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome and same to you :)