Sunsets of Me and You

~ a romantic little scribble ~

art ~ razmov konstantin

 

The beauty

of your kiss

lingers

as warm, as sweet

as a sunset

weaving the sky with ribbons of crimson red passion

            tied softly around my heart…

 

Your lips

compose beautiful ballads

to paint the sky

as the moon waits

for starlight’s dance

and the breeze whispers of love

                 your love

 

Gather this breeze, love

gather me

until skies ignite

and I surrender

to one more kiss…

 

        content

               sharing sunsets of me and you

 

 

                   

Reviews

[Joyce S. Greene]

I love your poetry, Julie, it is entrancing and always leaves me smiling. It's hard to decide which lines to quote, but the ones that struck me first were:

as warm, as sweet
as a sunset
weaving the sky with ribbons of crimson red passion
tied softly around my heart…

So very beautiful . . .

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoy my poetry Joyce. I'm a fan of yours as well. I appreciate you and your friendship. :) Julie

[Pryde Foltz]

Gather this breeze, love
gather me
until skies ignite
and I surrender
to one more kiss…

Best pick up line ever. Tee her. Very beautiful, Julie.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing artwork. The good description led the reader to very nice ending. A sweet kiss. Few things in life can equal the sweetness of the kiss. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you for your lovely comment. I appreciate you. :) Julie

[Saddam]

Gather this breeze, love
gather me
until skies ignite
and I surrender
to one more kiss…
ah....how lovely... I forget any thing when I read this. truely romantic at sunshine. loveya.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one Ssadd. Have a lovely evening my friend :) Julie

[Trace]

Love looks so good on you my sweet friend.
When love is in your heart, it shows in your poetry.

This is incredibly beautiful.
And, oh yes,,,, I THAT kiss...
always something magical.

Huggs... Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very sweet comment Trace. Hugs, Julie

[wordman]

magic moments,sweet memories of you and me
great job julie

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

This is romantic and beautiful...ahhhhh >>>(that's a sigh)
He is one lucky man whoever he may be.
Wonderful words and images...
My admiration Princess Butterfly...
Scott

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Scott. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. Have a lovely day :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott........

[Jack...]

Julie, your poetry softly touches me, it lifts me as i read. You make the world seem like every day is sunny and warm. Not a cloud in the sky...beautiful

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the wonderful compliment Jack - Everyday is sunny and warm - it is 90 degrees here in Southern California today...scorching.... :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

There is nothing like sharing those magical and wonderful moments with the one you love and then weave it with the ribbons of memory...Sooo beautiful...:)............

[MsJewel]

Thank you Sami! :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........................

[Frieda P]

Sigh Julie, just a zephyr of subtle whispers of love, this is bliss. I love how you call them scribbles, this is more along the lines of artwork in motion. Stunning my friend. :-)

[MsJewel]

Scribbles are little heart prints of the one I love. I'm thrilled you enjoy them. Thank you for the wonderful compliment. :) Julie

[Frieda P]

I think it's cute, Em calls them scribbles too. Always a pleasure my friend. :-)

[Leigh]

Your lips compose beautiful ballads wow thats a knockout line, your subtle intoxicating words of love pack a mighty punch

[MsJewel]

Thank you Leigh! Have a beautiful day my friend. :) Julie