Dancing in White

Dancing in White

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ written in a Monotetra form ~

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photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

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A whisper breaks the silent night

as soft cascades, brilliant and bright

send shimmers of warm diamond light

dancing in white, dancing in white

 

 

Like falling stars just shooting by

lacy glitter lights up the sky

with such beauty to dress the eye

a tear may cry, a tear may cry

 

 

As the night sky begins to glow

a snow angel appears below

wings flutter in the fallen snow

a gorgeous show, a gorgeous show

 

 

And as she twirls in graceful stance

a melody sweet as romance

seems to play and to enhance

this lovely dance, this lovely dance

 

 

I catch my breath, but not with fright

as soft whispers create a sight

to send my heart this snowy night

dancing in white, dancing in white

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© 2014 MsJewel


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Beautiful places and visions create by the poem.
"And as she twirls in graceful stance
a melody sweet as romance
seems to play and to enhance
this lovely dance, this lovely dance"
Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one :) Julie



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dear Julie... there is more to heaven
and earth than we can ever imagine...
and you are blessed with scenes of
light and love... beautiful poetry.
truly... Pat

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Pat. I hope all is well with you and your family. Hugs, Julie
Patricia Wedel

10 Years Ago

dear Julie... Roger is doing well
in dialysis three times a week.
My grands Ethan and.. read more
MsJewel

10 Years Ago

I'm so glad Rogeris doing well. It's always wonderful to see you! Hugs, Julie
This is extremely beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
I don't know Jules....awful lot of sighing going on around here. Me,.... I tend to be a heavy breather hiding behind the curtains. Wow, that didn't sound weird and creepy at all. Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain!!! Beautifully written, luv'd it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Nope..not weird and creepy at all LOL....I'm glad you enjoyed it Raymond! :) Julie
Well another beautiful writing by a beautiful heart. Nothing to review this just sighed sighed sighed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you my wonderful friend. :) Julie
Saddam

10 Years Ago

Only a smile.
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B.J
A very lovely gentle piece. I just enjoyed reading it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Barb! :) Julie
B.J

10 Years Ago

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MAC
just beautiful....had me singing and dreaming of endearing thoughts

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful comment Mark. Have a lovely evening :) Julie
A very lovely, lyrical piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Pryde! :) Julie
Ah this is a beautiful Monotetra. You are the little romantic poetess of this site. The imagery in this write is mind blowing, I could picture everything - it's so vivid. Just beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. Have a beautiful evening :) Julie
so this is a monotetra.. never knew that... but I do know that from the beginning picture, to the last sylable, from the first snow flake to the last "dancing in white"; I was mesmorized and moving to the music of this poem as I read it on the screen.. its a special and romantic poet who can make snow fly out of my computer, but Julie, thank you for doing it... ~~red(makingsnowangels)zone

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your very kind comment my sweet friend. I appreciate you! :) Julie
Beautifully written monotetra, Julie. The imagery is stunning. I could picture her dancing in the snow and others watching her mesmerized by her beauty. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Lydi - it is 85 degrees today - just trying to stay cool.... Hugs, Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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