Still

Still

A Poem by MsJewel
"

~ another little love scribble ~

"

art ~ Carrie Graber

 

 

 

If time could still…

 

…I think it could

for the day is quite still

nights are even quieter

 

still

being alone

doesn’t mean I’m lonely

 

it just means

I’d prefer to be with you

 

still


© 2014 MsJewel



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I like the logic of your words. Many kinds of loneliness. Sometime being alone is needed and sometime we are waiting. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Exactly what I was thinking! :) Julie



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The longings of love. Great work! Enjoyed reading this. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


this is a sad and rather lonely write but also dripping in romantic gestures. gestures that you do so well Julie. another excellent write......

Posted 3 Years Ago


Dude! - - -YES! This is masterfully done. Like frosting on your lips...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

A sweet comment. Thank you. :) Julie
Very simple, but lovely poem like the stillness you describe.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Trevor :) Julie
Wooo, girl you are on fire! Sometimes being alone can be the best thing that happens to us. I sometimes think that being alone is what I need... and it's a good way to end the night for me sometimes. Just relaxing.

Loved it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

It's the perfect time to write poetry~ :) Julie
Julie, you should publish a book of your poetry so I would have somethng beautiful to keep me company on those lonely nights. Just make sure there are 365 poems in the book. :)

This is the perfect little poem, filled with just the right amount of affection. I love this poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Some things never change, do they? There is strong romantic longing in every line of this one, Julie. I liked it. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


Wonderful write... endearing, but also has a subtle strength within your words.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you! :) Julie
still sounds like the bill Anderson song

Posted 3 Years Ago


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MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Ron :) Julie
I need alone time. All writers do. It's hard to be creative when someone is standing behind you demanding "Baby? When are we going?... Baby?...ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING TO ME!?!?"

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you BR :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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