Time is Nowhere

Time is Nowhere

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ just a little love scribble ~

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photography ~ Dimitri Caceaune

 

 

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With a kiss he thaws the sleeping snow

and fantasy finds springtime

days are warm,

nights warmer still

we dance among the fireflies

heart's aglow

naked to the naked moon

and in the brilliance of its crest

time is nowhere...

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© 2014 MsJewel



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dreamy, natural, beautiful, enchanting, lovely and altogether everything wonderful, yes yet another miss Julie classic. put them all in a book, make a gigantic collection and il be sure to buy that one, these are the poems that remind you what poetry is truelly all about, you have a rare and uniquely beautiful way of writing darling, keep on :) :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment :) Julie



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Put me in a dreamy like state of happiness everywhere i go happiness shows.

Posted 2 Years Ago


That's something which passes through the soul touching the heart. It's simply romantic delivering that time has no importance. The thing that's important is you and your lover. Whatever the circumstances, you both stay together and carry on with your lives. Actually it's simple but the use of phrases makes it impressive and more attractive.....

Posted 3 Years Ago


MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your very kind comment :) julie
I love that this feels like a snippet in a dream sequence; as though it really were just a dream's moment captured and translated for us to read, see, feel, and remember.
A lovely little romantic love scribble :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
Dreamy poem my friend. I like its imaginary. Well, what is for next! Have a Great day my sweet friend.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
dreamy, natural, beautiful, enchanting, lovely and altogether everything wonderful, yes yet another miss Julie classic. put them all in a book, make a gigantic collection and il be sure to buy that one, these are the poems that remind you what poetry is truelly all about, you have a rare and uniquely beautiful way of writing darling, keep on :) :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment :) Julie
Magical little poem-what a powerful kiss! Fantasies are colorful and lovely like springtime-love this!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Fantasies are lovely - I agree. Thank you for your wonderful comment and for your friend request. I .. read more
I really like this, my thoughts on this is that sometimes we get so caught up in the moment of something really enjoyable we forget about time or anything that is bad. Lost in a blissful moment where time doesn't exist. I don't know that just came to mind when reading this. Very beautiful piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
BloodySkye

3 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Wow thats just beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! :) Julie
This is beautiful work. I love it

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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