Ever So Quietly

Ever So Quietly

A Poem by MsJewel

 

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When the day breathes cool and the shadows lengthen

and a quietness left behind

fills my thoughts and dreams

 

I think of you

and remember…

 

There are no farewells

 

Love never leaves

It’s found in a heartbeat

that echoes with the joy of a memory

held within the soul for eternity

 

The light within my heart that’s still burning

 

ever so quietly


© 2014 MsJewel



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I don't have a favorite line cause it's hard to separate out one... they all reflect a truth about love that often eludes people.I think that's due mainly to that most never experience lovelike this Julie. It is very apparent that you have and in the places that matter most (memories)still do. You capture it well Julie. ~~redzone

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I can't imagine my life without love..whether it is now or in memories..love is what makes it all wo.. read more
redzone

3 Years Ago

I do Julie, I do .. better real though I think.



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I agree.
"Love never leaves
It’s found in a heartbeat
that echoes with the joy of a memory
held within the soul for eternity"
Thank you dear Poet for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote



Posted 2 Years Ago


'There are no farewells' is 'the' line in this poem for me as it speaks of a refusal to accept love lost. Ever so quietly and ever so loudly I think.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
You touched my heart with some powerful poetic words. So much emotions hovering over the oceans of your heart ... making us all feel the true feeling of being loved in the life because it`s a love which brings happiness so the misery as well .. but it still lived alive around the world ~~ in an every corner of the world ~~~ amid the pond of all the seductive hearts. Lovely .. very deep words you used this time.. I can feel the emotions of being alone through the piece .. wonderful write as always. Great job! ;)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Like an eternal flame, this love shall never wane or extinguish !

Penned with such heartfelt, endearing sentiment!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Tom :) Julie
Love never leaves
I love it Jewel

Posted 3 Years Ago


What is life without love? Most excellent poem my sweet friend.Love is eternal it never ends true :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your very kind comment :) Julie
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

You are welcome Jules :)
Love never leaves

It’s found in a heartbeat

that echoes with the joy of a memory

held within the soul for eternity
_wow,beautiful indeed, i loved it

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Your comments always leave me with a smle :) Julie
Love never leaves if you love yourself. I heard that somewhere.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you BR :) Julie
Oh you so eloquently versed what I truly believe. Love never dies cause it will always flourish in our heart. A very lovely poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

3 Years Ago

It was my pleasure.

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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