Imagination in Flight

Imagination in Flight

A Poem by MsJewel

art by Pino

 

 

 

Beyond sleepy afternoon naps

cuddled in mama's lap

in the big white wicker chair

 

and further than the breeze ruffling the curtains,

teasing the calla lilies in the garden

 

Above the clouds,

beyond the horizon and further than the sun…fading slowly…

 

Children fly

 

Imaginations soaring on glittery wings

weaving magical dreams with a Tinkerbelle wand

through endless skies

 

Fluttering

 

above enchanted lands and mysterious seas

where captains have hooks and wrongs are made right

in pure innocence

 

and anything’s possible

because children fly….

 

I look in her eyes…and I can fly too


© 2014 MsJewel



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So Sweet. What a beautiful poem. Even what a beautiful heart you`ve got, Julie .. I`ve just read your seductive stuffs, I didn`t know that your so ........... simply so .......... sorry I don`t have any words to praise your beauty so, yeah ..so your simply .............. adorable.

This poem`s very good & even the pic.is revealing the history of beauty indeed. Well penned write, Julie. I`m going to give you 10/10 for this beautiful write ;)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend. I write romantic poems, but my favorite poems are written for my sweet d.. read more
Stephen

3 Years Ago

My pleasure, Julie. Well, you know what? I`d just seen your seductive side before reading this piece.. read more



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// Imaginations soaring on glittery wings
weaving magical dreams with a Tinkerbelle wand
through endless skies //

Wow, this just sent me right up on to cloud 9 and touched my heart. This is really beautiful. I am a huge fan of Tinkerbelle... she was one of my favourite characters from Disney. Just wow.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend. :) Julie
Very lovely write Miss Julie..
A bit of magic in your thoughts and words.

Scott

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

It's wonderful to see you. Thank you for stopping by with such a lovely comment. Childhood should be.. read more
Scott Metro

3 Years Ago

Yes indeed..the magic is what makes childhood so full of promise.
You are welcome Princess.read more
100/100, you are a beautiful writer Julie! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

You are too kind. Thank you Kyle :) Julie
I love the memories you've rekindled in me. I was able to keep a fantasy alive in my youngest son from the age of 3 to 11 years old. He still doesn't know how I did the things I did that kept the fantasy alive.
Children today grow too fast. The fantastic world of mystery and magic is all to soon shattered.
A parents joy for their children isn't often expressed. A beautiful piece of writing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I agree - children do grow up too fast. Some of my best childhood memories were reading with my moth.. read more
A touching poem about the power of loving a child. A wonderful write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Innocence of a child..... dreams of a mother.....
I wonder how much you brought with you from your childhood
to share with your own daughter?

And I hope you are able to see your own . In your daughter from you sharing her teachings.

As always..... you are so talented.
I love this special piece.

Trace.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

As a father, I know you cherish these special times Trace. If only they could last forever....but no.. read more
Trace

3 Years Ago

Hope your mothers day was wonderful.

T
MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you sweetie!
This beautiful poem is free verse poetry at its best. Here you have a poem within a poem where children seem as butterflies:

Above the clouds
Children fly
Fluttering
in pure innocence

Your outer poem reminds me of Peter Pan guiding children off to Never-never-land. That storybook picture seems to have inspired it all. If I ever write a response song-poem using rhyme and meter that’s as good as this free verse poem, I’ll keep it for myself as a little butterfly gem. Your poem shall flutter about lighting the corridors of my mind ‘til I do.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

My clever friend ~ you caught my poem within the poem! Childhood fairytales and fantasies are some .. read more
Very beautiful memories they are she will always be a part of your life that will never die, the who have known her will see the beautiful side of her in you Julie. :) Larry

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Larry! :) Julie
JULIE!!!! You've done it again. You have taken me back to my childhood. My mom was a single mother and she would take each one of us, at separate times, and read us bedtime stories. You brought to tears almost with this beautiful piece. So amazing miss Julie!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you felt this one Christian! Thank you for your wonderful comment! :) Julie
I remember I had a great imagination ,space ships was my thing
a beautiful piece it all complimented each other

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Ron! :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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