Paint the Sky

~ just a little scribble ~

 

art ~ elena dudina

 

 

~~~

Somewhere beyond a dream

he paints the sky a velvet amethyst

 

sailing above the rocks and sand

above the trembling ocean

 

A breath through my window…bathed in moonlight

 

Whispering…

“Wake my sweet angel”

 

And I awaken,

for his voice is the blue bird song

in a music box of beautiful memories

 

a lullaby

to soothe my soul

the poetry

within two hearts forever intertwined

 

I take this hand that holds my heart

for it is warm and it is strong

and he is unforgettable

 

And for a moment in time

we paint the sky

 

…somewhere beyond a dream

~~~

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

The etherial images this piece conveys in the mind are haunting. Dreams can help us to live better in the real world. The security you felt when you were together is rising within your dreams to keep you feeling safe and contented.
You express love in so many ways that I don't think many of us have reached that level.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment my sweet friend. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful weekend. :) Julie

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮*sigh* Beautiful. This soothing tone and rhythm makes this piece remarkable. Write on!╰☆╮

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

"And for a moment in time
we paint the sky"
Good to paint the sky. Allow us to dream and hope great dreams. I enjoyed the poem. Filled with beauty and positive energy. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[livetowrite]

That's a lovely poem. Beautifully written thanks for sharing.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Emma :) Julie

[Ladysue]

Julie, Julie, this is poetry at its best. What a truly magnificent poem. You have a genuine and natural way of writing that reflects and captures gorgeous emotions effortlessly.

I love the line ' his voice..in a music box of beautiful memories..and the last few lines took my breath away..this is my favorite of yours this far.. your expression is exquisite..

[MsJewel]

Thank you so much... dreams can be wonderful...and then we wake up. Thank goodness for poetry! :) Julie

[Daydreamer]

I fall out of words when it's time to submit a review to a poem like this.
love any work involving any conception of "dreams", and love how they take us into places no one can see but other intoxicated dreamers :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment from one dreamer to another :) Julie

[redzone]

So Julie, do your little scribbles always come with a full box of crayolas??? I think so anyway.. those last 3 lines are wonderful... paint away my friend..

~~redzone

[MsJewel]

I like to color - but only if I can color outside the lines...:)

[redzone]

Lines??? Are there lines??? Colors have no lines, they bleed and blend into each other... hmmmm kinda like they way you write love/romantic poems Julie... ;0)

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet.

[willweb]

This poem was quite beautiful. I enjoyed this very much.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

If he exists..your life will shine..happy ever after.
Needs expressed very well Princess.

Admiration.
Scott

[MsJewel]

Thank you Scott. Have a lovely day my friend. :) Julie