Open Windows

Open Windows

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ just a scribble ~

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photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

Love

open the window of my soul

and lift the cloud of lace curtains

colorless in the mist of this rainy night

 

Look past the wishing well of tender memories

still echoing with each heartbeat

(filled with longing for you)

 

So I may reach out

and hold the hands of time

 

Remembering…

 

You

who taught me

with beauty and grace

 

“When your dreams like stars fall like rain from the sky,

dance in the rain

and tomorrow will bring sunshine and sweet daisies

if you listen to your heart”

 

Love changes everything….even from a distance

 

Yes my angel,

the window is open

~~~


© 2014 MsJewel



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Sometimes Julie, I read your poems and wonder is it dreams that fall like rain, or is it the wonderful images that dance in my head??? Is it the wishing well of tender memories, or is it that you make time stand still?? I think even with the windows open, you must invite love in... Julie, I am always in awe of the way you write.
~~redzone

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Curt, thank you for the lovely comment and compliment. I appreciate you! :) Julie



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this is such a beautiful piece! well well done

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

4 Months Ago

thank you for your kind words :) Julie
True blessing comes from your soul love letters of the mind open ones heats to the possibility love strike the could amount to a lifetime of love and desires of the heart full filled in motions of the night when Love it granted a kiss and a few wishes the holds on in the middle of the evening into the dawns early light lovers hold tight to memories of a romantic heart.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Your poems are always sweet delights, Julie. Your words fill my heart with beauty and grace.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you! :) Julie
I really like this poem.
It reminds me of, "So it Rains".
You have a way with penning love and a fond remembering.
Yes, there is a sadness, but my favorite part is the open window at the end...
Very lovely. My favorite of yours so far.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Thank you so much for this :) It was so well written and delicately phrased. I"m really glad I got the chance to read this

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Ms Jewel
for your "open windows"
Only one word
"Speechless"

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
"Love your poem, beautiful words, uprising your thoughts" kc

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Kristen :) Julie
Great write! Very fluid and written with a beautiful choice of words ;)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
I guess you've heard the saying. " If you love something let them go, if they come back they are yours, if they don't they never where."
An open window. The metaphores.
Such feeling and passion.
Sometimes wonder if it's the images you use that give inspiration or the poetry that searches for the image.
Really superb piece, again.
My dear friend this is an inspired piece. I've added it to my (short) library collection.

Posted 3 Years Ago


MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words, my dear friend. I appreciate you. As far as the images I select - I .. read more
MAD ENGLISHMAN

3 Years Ago

You've obviously got a good eye.
I am hopelessly in love with this write!! Stunning piece here and I am so sad I did not get to read this sooner!! Love with an open window.....

Fantastic!! Truly breath taking. I am rendered speechless!!

This is going into my favorites! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment Madalyn. :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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