Until...

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A Poem by MsJewel
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~ goodbye isn't always forever ~

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art ~ arthur braginsky

 

 

Free my hair upon your pillow
in a quiet golden storm
Kiss the teardrops from the clouds
until the rain is warm

and let it fall, soft as a whisper
of silk upon the skin
With each breath keep my embrace

           until we meet again

Dream our dream without an ending
like an unfinished song
Hear the winds echo forever
and know it wont be long
for silver moons to shine once more
on this gentle hurricane
Find my heart your safe harbor

          until we meet again


© 2014 MsJewel



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This is stunning! The flow and gentle nature of the words that dance along seamlessly to create this beautiful piece is masterful. It's an effortless read nd one that has captivated me and my imagination of what true love surely is.

Very nice.

Regards
Troy

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely words! :) Julie



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Such a sweet and lovely and gently written piece Jules.Your writings always leave me smiling :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you sweet friend. Your comments always leave me with a smile :) Julie
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Yeah ... how true ~~~ Well said, Julie. Yeah, "Goodbye`s not always forever" like a "Past or some memories can`t be vanished into the ashes forever." I can feel the deep warmed sensations of the write. Julie, I must say, that you`ve got a very sexy (Beautiful and positive) thinking about love, the strawberry flavor of yous with your tender heart`s all what making you precious around the whole world ~~~ with the kind thoughts of yous. Very beautiful poem, once again .. you won my heart penning down such kinda deep thoughts. All lines`re my fav. even you know what? This write`s one of my favorites indeed because I always believed, "The emotions make the stuffs beautiful ~~ with the harmony to beloved!!" Wonderful write!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment Stephen. :) Julie
Wow,,, Wow,,, Wow.

This reads like a fairytale.
so soft and and sensual
and so so pretty.

I just love The last two lines
they anchor the whole poem into something special.

Trace

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Trace. Your comments mean so much to me. I adore you. Hugs, Julie
I wrote a poem with the same title, but it reads much differently.
This was a fond wish and a gentle calling.
Well done Julie.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it David. Thank you for the friend request. I look forward to reading your poe.. read more
 David Scott

3 Years Ago

Unpublished...
Not close to your work Julie.
Feel free to read or not.
I have he.. read more
MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words and your lovely compliment. My poetry is very simple - really just li.. read more
Stunning writing with dazzling metaphoric references!
I love your tone; it sounds friendly to the reader and the poems are always smooth
you pour your soul in poetry🎀🎀🎀🎀

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your very kind and encouraging words :) Julie
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Such a soft and delicate poem. The romantic kiss brushed upon this write is such a gorgeous image to behold. I truly loved this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
Oh the picture you paint with your words of romance are so breathtaking what a magnificent piece of poetry you have weaved.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you my romantic friend! :) Julie
Another amazing poem..... peaceful and vivid.. You are an amazing poet

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I appreciate your kind words :) Julie
Wonderful write..
Calm, peaceful and romantic :)
I loved the lines
"Find my heart your safe harbor
until we meet again"

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you :)) Julie
A beautiful poem. Soft and gentle memory can make us wish and hope for more. You create good vision of a new meeting and possibilities. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. Always a pleasure to read your word.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your encouraging words. :) Julie
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

3 Years Ago

The pleasure was mine :))

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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