Until...

Until...

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ goodbye isn't always forever ~

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art ~ arthur braginsky

 

 

Free my hair upon your pillow
in a quiet golden storm
Kiss the teardrops from the clouds
until the rain is warm

and let it fall, soft as a whisper
of silk upon the skin
With each breath keep my embrace

           until we meet again

Dream our dream without an ending
like an unfinished song
Hear the winds echo forever
and know it wont be long
for silver moons to shine once more
on this gentle hurricane
Find my heart your safe harbor

          until we meet again


© 2014 MsJewel



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This is stunning! The flow and gentle nature of the words that dance along seamlessly to create this beautiful piece is masterful. It's an effortless read nd one that has captivated me and my imagination of what true love surely is.

Very nice.

Regards
Troy

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely words! :) Julie


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This poem is lovely. "With each breath keep my embrace until we meet again". I could feel that this poem really comes from the heart. The words were all beautifully weaved together. Ahhh, I love this!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
A very romantic and sensual poem, with a touch of longing. Lovely work.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Julie you are certainly a romantic

Posted 3 Years Ago


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MsJewel

3 Years Ago

As are you my sweet friend :) Julie
This is the whole romantic package. It is soft and sweet and so perfectly inviting:

Free my hair upon your pillow
in a quiet golden storm

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
Now THAT'S a romantic poem. Not erotic, romantic. There's a difference

Posted 3 Years Ago


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MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you BR :) Julie
You bring the romance of life back to the moments, your words melt as they permeate within to bubble back out in a new for of hope and love ... really nice xx

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
This is such an emotional piece of your heart expressed so beautifully as you only know how too, you truly have a very romantic side of you it always show up in your writing. :)Larry

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Larry :) Julie
My dear friend your writing is becoming divine every time I read, just like wine with passage of time its taste much better...this work make you feel..Loved!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for your lovely words :) Julie
A. Amos

3 Years Ago

Loved it:) you're most welcome
Without an ending, your song goes on. Without a longing, your meeting is prolonged. Without an echo, we will never hear those marvelous words as your readers...A splendid poem...:)...........

Posted 3 Years Ago


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MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Sami :) Julie
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)................................

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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