If..,

~ a scribble ~

art by Laurie Blank

 

If dreams came true, my precious one

lonely nights would never be

For I would let my hair flow

in an ocean of beauty

I’d catch you with each golden strand

and hold you close to me

We’d sail away upon sweet dreams

in colors of the sea

Reflections of an endless love

for all eternity

Reviews

[Gee]

I'm glad Lydia read and reviewed as it brought me over to read. Such simplicity, but beautifully penned.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

A sweetly romantic write....so smooth, Julie. Love the rhyming and the rhythm of it. Sorry I missed this when you posted it! Lydi**

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Lydi. Thanks so much :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i would love to be on that boat...it would be smooth sailing of love...no motion sickness...just sunsets, beautiful dawns, and breathless scenery.
j.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... so alluring and enduring to
dream and believe. To capture and hold
your love with strands of golden passion
is surely pure poetry. truly... Pat

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

This is so romantic, I love this one to pits. :-)

Kaze~

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Short, sweet, expressive and romantic.
Nothing more to add.
loved it.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[SmittyJas]

Sweet poetry oh You so blessed poetry writer from the Beach

[Cory Barrett]

Oh what dream this would be. If our thoughts are what we are, then our dreams are the only real truth to hour happiness.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

Another beauty Jules.An absolute delight to read your work everytime :)

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Moonie]

BEAUTIFUL!!!! If only dreams came true....:))

[MsJewel]

if only.....:) Julie