For Autumn and For Always

For Autumn and For Always

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a collaboration by Trace and MsJewel ~

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fall drizzle ~ artist unknown

 

 

 

When the sun won't shine
like I want it to
and my thoughts bleed shades of grey
I will lean on you

 
When your heart is sad and heavy
and cold winds seem to call
When you need arms to hold you

I’ll catch you should you fall

 

 

         

It is Autumn

the air filled with pumpkin scents

and golden hues

 

Change stirs the breeze, ruffling the leaves

once lush and green,

dressing the trees in tiny flames

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    a

        l

            l

                i

                                    n

                        g

                              like rain

 in crimson red and brilliant orange

 

                                Still,

                 it’s a winsome breeze

perhaps it doesn’t know

                                 it’s almost winter….

 

When the leaves have fallen

and the breeze shivers through lonely branches,

I’ll find shelter in your arms

Knowing....

                                     I can lean on you

                                                                 you would never let me fall

     

 

 


© 2014 MsJewel



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I must say i was busy crossing this misty road when i found this golden ray of yours. Sucha lovely poem. The symbolism of seasons as dark and bright times of life is awesome. Your collab is too good.writing style of you both merges into one giving a really different and refreshing taste.Awe strucl by the brilliant images here. Love and wishes to you both ;)

~ Sophy

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your excellent comments on our collaboration.
Trace



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This is beautiful.It leaves me feeling safe and warm. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


a long one madam
I’ll catch you should you fall??? come again.

good madam...
always quiet similar
and similarly diss-similar

good ...

"When the leaves have fallen
and the breeze shivers through lonely branches,
I’ll find shelter in your arms
Knowing....
I can lean on you
you would never let me fall
"
good i like it...

it is not that deep
that thorny
of course the end
or climax
do is blunt
but i like it...

p.v.p.d. sri harsha
24-02-2015


Posted 2 Years Ago


Your poems jerk at tears and tug at the heart. Only an ignorant reader would dare to find fault in your poetry. It is a beautifully designed and perfectly built.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I'm humbled by your very kind and generous comment. Thank you so much :) Julie
This is as beautiful as the font used and that lil bit of artistry up there is adorable!! The best part of it is the title of the poem, it has a kind of comfort to it.....Its lovely.... you guys nailed it beautifully.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind an generous words :) Julie
I absolutely love how you attach a photo that is similar to the writing you create! And it's amazing how you arrange the words in different shapes so the meaning gets across to the reader. Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you. Writing with Trace is always a treat. We both love poetry and art - which makes it so ea.. read more
╰☆╮This brought a giant grin to my face and made me think of my marriage. Beautiful, beautiful work, both of you.╰☆╮

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I'm so glad you enjoyed our poem Brittany. It was so much fun to write. Have a beautiful day my fri.. read more
Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry. You gave the Fall splendor and possibility. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome Julie.
Gee, the painting was gorgeous or so I thought until I entered into this poetic pairing, now I know what gorgeous is. Beautiful, both of you, this was beautiful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Your poem made Autumn look a hell lot more romantic. Loved it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie


Sweet fall of tender leaves warms the heart...100/100+100/100




Rossen

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words my sweet friend :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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