Moving South

Moving South

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a romantic scribble ~

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With every breath, with every sigh

we chase moonlight

soft are the moonbeams

            just out of reach

 

You…with your midnight eyes

and me…weak from your loveliness

longing for the veil to lift

                        aching to taste joy

 

                  waiting in the darkness

with no other light except that which is you

burning in my soul

like the soft flame of a lighted match

moving south

with every breath, with every sigh

                                                but just out of reach….

 

                        and still,

                                                we chase moonlight


© 2014 MsJewel



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One of my favorites poem... as expected. You still write very deep romantic poetry. Your latest-work`s very breathtaking. Every word of this write`s meant to be inhaled with your breath left on your written pages. You still conquer my heart... with words.

I`d be looking forward to reading your more work!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stephen

2 Years Ago

Very pleasurable to drink you as well. Well, if it`s not too forward then i`d kinda like to know, ho.. read more
MsJewel

2 Years Ago

I'm good Stephen. I hope you're doing well!
Stephen

2 Years Ago

I`m fine. Thanks for taking it to your concern!



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You've included all the romantic signs I relate to best: moonlight, moonbeams, & midnight . . . the "m" alliteration lends itself to soothing love strokes. I like the illusion of "moving south" -- as we kiss & nuzzle up north, our thoughts are always yearning southward, so this is a delightfully subtle way to describe it. Your carefully-selected words conjure up a very sensual scene here.

Posted 1 Year Ago


One of my favorites poem... as expected. You still write very deep romantic poetry. Your latest-work`s very breathtaking. Every word of this write`s meant to be inhaled with your breath left on your written pages. You still conquer my heart... with words.

I`d be looking forward to reading your more work!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stephen

2 Years Ago

Very pleasurable to drink you as well. Well, if it`s not too forward then i`d kinda like to know, ho.. read more
MsJewel

2 Years Ago

I'm good Stephen. I hope you're doing well!
Stephen

2 Years Ago

I`m fine. Thanks for taking it to your concern!
and still,
we chase moonlight

Beautiful write and lovely read.
Great as always.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Saddam

2 Years Ago

Welcome dear
I read this, then reread it once again.
What escaped me was only a sigh at the ending both times.
I loved the softness of this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you Michael. :) Julie
Michael G.

2 Years Ago

No, thank you for writing this.
Moving south, but just out of reach. It sounds so familiar. The genre of this poem is not one I usually seek out, but this one speaks to me on many levels, and I like it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
The good description took the reader to good places and great desire. Always good to chase the moonlight. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


oooh I think I may sit in these words for a while and bathe ... mmm mmm mmmmmm mmm mmmm :) Lovely feeling I get from this one xx

Posted 3 Years Ago


Whoa!!! Soft, sensual, sexy...You have hit another home run with this....

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one Steve. Thanks so much :) Julie
Amazing words you've put together Julie. It has somewhat of a mystical feel to it, "waiting in darkness burning in my soul" even though you wait in darkness there's still light within the dark. I love this, enjoyed it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment Rob. It's always wonderful to see you :) Julie
Wow, this is very beautiful, so mysterious and sensual. You know to touch the right strings. Great, liked it very much,

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Rudi. Thanks so much! :) Julie

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MsJewel

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