Constant ~ a collaboration with Trace

Constant ~ a collaboration with Trace

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a collaboration with Trace ~

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                    art  by Gary Benfield

 

 

His love is ever constant

warm in this passing from autumn to winter

long branches bending to the wind

catching me in a kiss

his hair smelling of the summer

his hands hotter than fire

as I lay upon his golden bed

weaving dreams from lilies and roses

 

for he would never let me forget springtime…

 

Her love is ever constant

as the day falls cool to a winter sunset,

soft as the silvery clouds teasing summer

sweet as the dew on slivers of grass

she gathers me in her gentle embrace

like a bouquet of fresh cut irises

                     innocent and glowing

her tender heart filled with dreams and desires

 

she welcomes me in springtime…

 

Though seasons change

                                    love stays

                                       forever constant


© 2014 MsJewel



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This is the stuff that dreams are made of.. I felt each word.. the contrasts that somehow fit so perfectly.. my senses teased as my heart yearns for the beauty and purity of love expressed here.. true love is constant no matter what is happening around it.. this was stunning in its imagery and emotion.. I could smell the heated scent of summer on his hair.. there is nothing like the smell and the feelings it can induce inside you when with the one who resides in your heart, your soul, your mind... this is breathtaking you two.. I absolutely loved every word.. favorites for sure.. romantic, passionate, and such a gentle caress that has my heart vibrating with want..

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely words April. I've missed you! :) Julie



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You guys... I'm in love with this collab if that is even possible. I so love it with all I have. You both make me swoon, in fact, I feel you could make me anyone swoon.

Gorgeous!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. I know Trace will be as well. Thanks so much. Hugs, Julie
This is the stuff that dreams are made of.. I felt each word.. the contrasts that somehow fit so perfectly.. my senses teased as my heart yearns for the beauty and purity of love expressed here.. true love is constant no matter what is happening around it.. this was stunning in its imagery and emotion.. I could smell the heated scent of summer on his hair.. there is nothing like the smell and the feelings it can induce inside you when with the one who resides in your heart, your soul, your mind... this is breathtaking you two.. I absolutely loved every word.. favorites for sure.. romantic, passionate, and such a gentle caress that has my heart vibrating with want..

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely words April. I've missed you! :) Julie
Wow.. this is unbelievably beautiful. ..kudos to both of you :)..
"Though seasons change
love stays
forever " - couldn't agree more :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
This is one eternal testimony to a true love. Beautiful presentation and font. Thanks for inviting.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
absolutely wonderful writing....the two of you blend together so well! am so pleased to read something new from you both! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much Mark. Your kind words mean so much to me :) Julie
I am reading this on a gloomy, rainy, morning and it gave me such a warm feeling. A wonderful collaboration between two very talented writers. Beautifully written with an image to match.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

I'm thrilled our little scribble could brighten your day. Happy New Year my sweet friend. :) Julie
wow.. this is beautiful..romantic...
its the kind of love we see in movies... beautiful

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie
A lovely write for both you and Trace Julie! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you cody! :) julie
Cody Williams

2 Years Ago

No problem at all.
a great collaboration, producing such a beautiful poem, almost ethereal and heavenly sent, thank you :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much Richard :) Julie
R Smith

2 Years Ago

your welcome Julie, Wow! love that new photo, absolutely beautiful :)
That is a beautiful love poem. What on earth would anyone want after love such as this................ a Jewel of a poem :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment. :) Julie

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