Softer than the Rain

Softer than the Rain

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a love poem ~

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Steve Hanks art

 

 

Softer than a touch of rain or dew

that glistened from the clouds in tender skies

your hands, your lips, your caress, I knew

and yet, in your embrace, I felt surprise

 

As if the skies were woven with sunbeams

to tie warming ribbons around my heart

and carry me as lovely as a dream

to gentle storms that wait…when clouds depart…

 

I found it was like spring, the lights divine,

as each sunrise was golden for the one

who only bloomed, this rose upon the vine,

in your embrace and kissed with the sun

 

The greatest gift of all you took, my love

and still, I will always remember you

when storms fall like springtime from above

softer than a touch of rain or dew


© 2015 MsJewel



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"I found it was like spring, the lights divine,
as each sunrise was golden for the one
who only bloomed, this rose upon the vine,
in your embrace and kissed with the sun.."

aah...! this is just excellent... you do have a way with words MsJewel... amazing

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie



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Your little naked heart`s all full of romance - Sweet-Romance which, I find, very fascinating to your lovers. The title of the beautiful write`s very feathery itself by the romantic sides of your poetry. Every time I walked across your pages, felt much better myself... with your poetic-words, no matter what. Well, I think, your stuffs`re seemed a remedy for heart which helps it getting healed-up with anew wind of peaceful-love.
However, Your put your own desperate heart into your work that`s the excellence of your art. And.. this`s the thing that I adore `bout you. Excellent work as always!

Posted 2 Years Ago


dear Julie... Love is part of nature and
breathes in drops of dew on roses scented
when softly falling rain brings memories of
tender moments. Heaven has blessed us with
your gift that sprinkles romance in celebration
of a garden of passion and love. truly ... Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago


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MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Your comment is like a warm hug on a winters night. Hugs, Julie
I absolutely love your writing and it comes even more alive with the photos. My favourite line is "as if the sky were woven with sunbeams". Don't stop writing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie
Exquisite in its romantic warmth, as always Julie, adore that last stanza, the touch of soft rain in remembrance, simply stunning.:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Well hello stranger! Where have you been? I've missed your gorgeous poetry! :) Julie
This poem is very lovely, sweet and gentle... Well done

Nicely penned :DD

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
This one feels like the touch of real love, healing and opening new doors, growing your soul and providing intense happiness in the process. Words here have indeed matched the pace with your feelings.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
You have a certain style in your love poems, but each time you look at love in a different angle. Very good. :) Rudi

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you Rudi :) julie
The greatest gift that was given, was taken way too soon,
yet will always be remembered.

Love is so powerful,

It is the foundation of our existence,
and your beautiful poetry.

Huggs, Trace

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MsJewel

2 Years Ago

I wonder why it is that we treasure it more once it is taken away. Life's lessons I imagine.
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A very nice and softly touched poem. I love Your all write.

I found it was like spring, the lights divine,
as each sunrise was golden for the one
who only bloomed, this rose upon the vine,
in your embrace and kissed with the sun

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Oh such a lovely poem. The way you expressed everything is amazing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

You are very sweet. Thank you :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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