Softer than the Rain

Softer than the Rain

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a love poem ~

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Steve Hanks art

 

 

Softer than a touch of rain or dew

that glistened from the clouds in tender skies

your hands, your lips, your caress, I knew

and yet, in your embrace, I felt surprise

 

As if the skies were woven with sunbeams

to tie warming ribbons around my heart

and carry me as lovely as a dream

to gentle storms that wait…when clouds depart…

 

I found it was like spring, the lights divine,

as each sunrise was golden for the one

who only bloomed, this rose upon the vine,

in your embrace and kissed with the sun

 

The greatest gift of all you took, my love

and still, I will always remember you

when storms fall like springtime from above

softer than a touch of rain or dew

© 2015 MsJewel


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"I found it was like spring, the lights divine,
as each sunrise was golden for the one
who only bloomed, this rose upon the vine,
in your embrace and kissed with the sun.."

aah...! this is just excellent... you do have a way with words MsJewel... amazing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie



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I'm not even sure what to say anymore, your words are always so beautiful and seem to leap from the page straight to our hearts. Another lovely offering Julie.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Will. Thanks :) Julie
I fell in love with this :) incredibly soft and tender.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Ana :) Julie
love conquers a multitude of storms eh!? :) i am an addicted news hound ..i watch and listen and read far too much .. your poetry is a wonderful balance ... of love .. of gentleness, of sharing, of passion .. good stuff on these cold cold upper midwest plains .. ;)
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the lovely comment and compliment. I'm sending you some California sunshine my sweet f.. read more
"I found it was like spring, the lights divine,
as each sunrise was golden for the one
who only bloomed, this rose upon the vine,
in your embrace and kissed with the sun.."

aah...! this is just excellent... you do have a way with words MsJewel... amazing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Your words are always so soft flowing a delicate / an inspiration :-) xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You are very sweet. Thank you :) Julie
I love this poetry from you your tender heart shines through and through Telling a lot about you and the sweet writing voice that is your choice. Your writing has a beautiful voice. Blessings from heaven above With a touch of God's Love.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You are very kind Jim. Thank you for your sweet words :) Julie
This is a very warm and tender write. You have expressed the feelings very well. I like your comparison to nature. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Valentine :) Julie
this is what love is...always being able to surprise each other, even when love could get routine---
nicely expressed.
jacob

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob :) Julie
jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

i like your title...reminds me of my favorite duo ever, simon and garfunkel...and the song garfunkel.. read more
A lovely shower of romance indeed that is needed in those parched days. An awakening to the beauty you weave. Excellent...:)......

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely words Sami :) Julie
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)......
Artwork and words. A beautiful place to land and be.
"I found it was like spring, the lights divine,
as each sunrise was golden for the one
who only bloomed, this rose upon the vine,
in your embrace and kissed with the sun"
The above lines can stand alone. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you my dear friend :) Julie
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. A amazing poem.

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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