Falling...

Falling...

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ just a scribble ~

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                   photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

If I were a raindrop would you catch me

would you hold me and not let me go

‘til dark skies that shuddered with lightning

                     would brighten

                                 painting rainbows

 

Kissing the sky like a sweet dream

                 where whip cream

                        clouds will be found…

 

If I were a raindrop

                        would you catch me

or would you let me fall to the ground?

 

 

 


© 2015 MsJewel



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vignettes of love from MsJewel ..absolutely beautiful ... your poem put me in the picture .. i am the picture .. kissing the sky in gentle rain .. so delightful, sensual and selfless in love .. i must put this one in the ol' library for sure .. such a pleasant enjoyable read!!
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Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie



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Stunning as always Julie. So easy to read and fall into the depths of true love with this one.

Thank you:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Damn I love this one! Again with the rain! I LOVE the rain!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Oh my gosh, I literally just stumbled upon this poem and I'm in love with it. A very beautifully written piece :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Each word creates a soft, longing dream; a dream of desire in the sweetest way. In the falling, we always seek one who will reach out to catch us. So beautifully voiced. xo

Posted 3 Years Ago


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MsJewel

3 Years Ago

thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
"If only I were a leaf..
I would play my part...
I would catch you.. hold you.. guard you...
Until the Sun breaks my heart"..

A really beautiful poem Julie..Loved it :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


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MsJewel

3 Years Ago

thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
Beautiful is a word that does no justice to what you have written.



Posted 3 Years Ago


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MsJewel

3 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) julie
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yet another beautiful piece Ms Jewel thank you

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MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) julie
Such a beautiful poem, Julie with verses that flows so effortlessly ...

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MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thanks again :) Julie
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sort of like the "he loves me, he loves me not" petal picking....fairly certain any man that loves you knows your quality and would gently catch that drop. another wonderful write Julie.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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MsJewel

3 Years Ago

thank you for your lovely comment Mark. Hugs, Julie
Slight intoxication of chronic love expressed in enamoring words. We envy the person for whom you have written it :)

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MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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