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Falling...

Falling...

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ just a scribble ~

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                   photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

If I were a raindrop would you catch me

would you hold me and not let me go

‘til dark skies that shuddered with lightning

                     would brighten

                                 painting rainbows

 

Kissing the sky like a sweet dream

                 where whip cream

                        clouds will be found…

 

If I were a raindrop

                        would you catch me

or would you let me fall to the ground?

 

 

 

© 2015 MsJewel


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vignettes of love from MsJewel ..absolutely beautiful ... your poem put me in the picture .. i am the picture .. kissing the sky in gentle rain .. so delightful, sensual and selfless in love .. i must put this one in the ol' library for sure .. such a pleasant enjoyable read!!
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie



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This was beautiful. I can picture it all in my head. Letting those drops fall on you and becoming a part of you. The gentle splash similar to a warm embrace. Good read. Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful...................

Kissing the sky like a sweet dream
where whip cream
clouds will be found…
If I were a raindrop would you catch me
would you hold me and not let me go

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful artwork and I like the poetry that ends with a question.
"If I were a raindrop
would you catch me
or would you let me fall to the ground?"
Some questions are answered by living and time. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Were they to catch you, would they absorb you? Would you cease to exist without them? Would you evaporate, slowly, back into the place from which you fell?

This made me wonder.....the nature and fluidity of connections.....but I digress.
This is quite beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yes I would catch you and keep you from falling to the ground,very sweet poem maybe I can write an answer poem call it I will catch you if you don't mind.This inspires me to write an answer.Very good poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


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B.J
You are so clever with the use of your words. They are beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow Miss Jewel, I loved the question in this. Don't we all just want to know if we fall is someone is going to catch us. I love this ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Beautiful, Julie! I love this. The raindrops are so metaphorical. Great job! Gently romantic with a beautiful soft voice. A new favorite.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words! :) Julie
Your raindrop fall so softly with wondrous thoughts and joy of the one who is the breath you breathe to kiss again with pasted lips. Only someone with a poet heart can truly write what they feel deep inside of them so beautifully as you have. You are more than someone with a bautiful skill when it comes to wrting affair of the heart. :) Larry

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Larry. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful day :) Julie
onceloved

9 Years Ago

You are more than welcome my Friend.
This has a feel of a Rod McKuen poem - "Do You Like the Rain." There is a soft gentleness here . . . and it's a good place to be. Very lovely, indeed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I'm not familiar with Rob McKuen, but now I will have to go look him up! :) Julie
MsJewel

9 Years Ago

There is no wrong side
or right side

no misery in not being loved
only .. read more
Michael G.

9 Years Ago

You are more than welcome. I love his album "The Sea." (It's on Utube.) And his website is A Safe Pl.. read more

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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