Falling...

Falling...

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ just a scribble ~

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                   photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

If I were a raindrop would you catch me

would you hold me and not let me go

‘til dark skies that shuddered with lightning

                     would brighten

                                 painting rainbows

 

Kissing the sky like a sweet dream

                 where whip cream

                        clouds will be found…

 

If I were a raindrop

                        would you catch me

or would you let me fall to the ground?

 

 

 

© 2015 MsJewel


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vignettes of love from MsJewel ..absolutely beautiful ... your poem put me in the picture .. i am the picture .. kissing the sky in gentle rain .. so delightful, sensual and selfless in love .. i must put this one in the ol' library for sure .. such a pleasant enjoyable read!!
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie



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Another lovely and romantic write. The imagery you use to pose your question is really engaging and telling.

NOTES: If I were [a] raindrop would you catch me


Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

ooops..thanks for catching that one! :) Julie
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. Glad I could help.
Awww, let out a sweet sigh; how beautiful and it is the question we all want answered, but you put in the most lovely metaphor: you that delightful tiny light liquid rain drop; just beautiful. Will you catch me? Wow. Thank you. Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

thank you for kind words :) Julie
Confuser

9 Years Ago

Beautiful writing. You are welcome!
Beautiful...a raindrop, so delicate and poignant, such a thread of tenseness within this yet so softly spoken, lovely xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Poppy :) Julie
Beautiful, Julie, as always. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Rudi :) Julie
Loved this...the visual hues against the back drop of the questions worked...Kissing the sky like a sweet dream
where whip cream...love this

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for the lovely comment :) Julie
I'd definitely catch you, so that you could write sweet dream poems for me all day long, at the risk of repeating myself, this one goes in my library along with the other 100 or so of yours, i must be a romantic poem junkie lol, as always Julie your writing is beautiful :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You are so sweet. Thank you dear friend and fellow romantic poetry junkie! :) Julie
vivid imagery. . I truly enjoyed this, and every time it rains now I'll he brought back to this poem.. thanks for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words :) julie
I really like this one of yours. So sweet and romantic. Makes me miss my husband even more. Keep them coming. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
I'd catch you. ....................

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you BR :) Julie
while this one still has the air of elegant romance, it has the added layer of vulnerability that is both endearing and affecting.. you write with such grace that the reader cannot help but be swept away on dreamy clouds and waves of caressing emotion... lovely as always.. this one has me dreaming of booming thunder and sizzling lightening that lights up the sky with passionate colors drenching us in a magical mist sweet and heated.. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your sweet comment and compliment. It's wonderful to see you. I've missed your poetry!.. read more

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Added on January 16, 2015
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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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