Falling...

Falling...

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ just a scribble ~

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                   photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

If I were a raindrop would you catch me

would you hold me and not let me go

‘til dark skies that shuddered with lightning

                     would brighten

                                 painting rainbows

 

Kissing the sky like a sweet dream

                 where whip cream

                        clouds will be found…

 

If I were a raindrop

                        would you catch me

or would you let me fall to the ground?

 

 

 

© 2015 MsJewel


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vignettes of love from MsJewel ..absolutely beautiful ... your poem put me in the picture .. i am the picture .. kissing the sky in gentle rain .. so delightful, sensual and selfless in love .. i must put this one in the ol' library for sure .. such a pleasant enjoyable read!!
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie



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I would catch you and never let you go this I do know. Sweet poem Let it rain let it rain Let it rain down on me.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

thank you Jim :) Julie
Aw this poem is really good!
what I really liked about it is the last stanza
''If I were a raindrop
Would you catch me
Or would you let me fall to the ground?''
We are so delicate, delicate like raindrop that can quickly turn to nothing
Amain piece of work

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. thanks so much :) Julie
I like the symbolism. You can spin and weave the words so well. I'm truly impressed, ma'am!!! I love the whip cream comparison....:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for kind words :) Julie
vignettes of love from MsJewel ..absolutely beautiful ... your poem put me in the picture .. i am the picture .. kissing the sky in gentle rain .. so delightful, sensual and selfless in love .. i must put this one in the ol' library for sure .. such a pleasant enjoyable read!!
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie
I would catch you on my tongue and swallow you up
Just so I could experience the sweetness of your essence.

Love this.

Trace

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

A sweet little response - but then again, you are a sweet beast. Love you. Julie
Des

9 Years Ago

Your writing is so beautiful , I love the poem. The last line was just perfection!
"i'd catch you and gently set you down"

Posted 9 Years Ago


MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob! :) julie
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Gee
If you were a raindrop I'd catch you,
a droplet to cherish and love,
your beauty I'd savour forever,
and then in the heavens above.

Was this the reply you received?????

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

No reply yet...but yours would be a lovely one :) Julie
Gee

9 Years Ago

It will come,patience.......
I would catch that raindrop and hold it tight
hold it till the morning light great write great graphics

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie
 wordman

9 Years Ago

you are welcome
Romantic poetry at its finest. I love youruse of raindrops as a symbol for falling for someone.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Cowboy! :) Julie
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

Always a pleasure sweets.
He should be honored and rushing to do that. A sweet treat with lovely romantic imagery...Bravo...............................

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...:)......................

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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