Falling...

Falling...

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ just a scribble ~

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                   photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

If I were a raindrop would you catch me

would you hold me and not let me go

‘til dark skies that shuddered with lightning

                     would brighten

                                 painting rainbows

 

Kissing the sky like a sweet dream

                 where whip cream

                        clouds will be found…

 

If I were a raindrop

                        would you catch me

or would you let me fall to the ground?

 

 

 

© 2015 MsJewel


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vignettes of love from MsJewel ..absolutely beautiful ... your poem put me in the picture .. i am the picture .. kissing the sky in gentle rain .. so delightful, sensual and selfless in love .. i must put this one in the ol' library for sure .. such a pleasant enjoyable read!!
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie



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If he were smart he would catch you and place you upon his lips.
No doubt he'll do something like, how could he not.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you lovely lady :) julie
yeah.................falling

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem :) Julie
Riverz

9 Years Ago

yer so welcome.

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Added on January 16, 2015
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Tags: love, romance, falling, rain, trust, security, msjewel, poetry

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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