Had The Sun Not Set

Had The Sun Not Set

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ would have, could have...should have? ~

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Yes, we would have kissed

if he had been mine…

 

In Augusts’ warm mist

when ripe on the vine

were strawberries sweet

and luscious to lips

just longing to meet

in soft little sips

 

The sun was a fire

through clouds of whip cream

‘til fervent desire

in a sky of dreams

faded into the mist

of twilights soft threat

 

Yes, we would have kissed

had the sun not set


© 2015 MsJewel



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The kiss that never happened, but was oh so wanted,
and more than likely by both.....

One never knows when the opportunity may arise again,
don't let it pass by without exploring the possibilities.

The softest expression
of love is felt
when wanting lips
together melt.

XOXO ;}
Trace

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Lay with me dear
upon the grass
lend me your lips
and I'll pinch your a*s...read more
Trace

2 Years Ago

Only if you are wearing your red heals and black dress


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Oh this is so wistful and full of longing. Your imagery is simply gorgeous. I enjoyed this lovely poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words. :) julie
So romantic and so tenderly presented. A nice piece of writing. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words :) Julie
i loved that a lot :)
especially "we would have kissed".. that just have lots of meanings, its like you long for that kiss but still couldnt get it for some reason .. i loved it

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie
Sad, the kiss that wasn't, the beauty of the sunset was clouded by this undelivered desire. But fear not Julie, the sun will rise again very soon and perhaps that kiss will come. This was beautiful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you sweetie! :) Julie
yes. we would've kissed if only.. I know exactly what this feels like. it happened to me a long time ago.
there's longing and wistfulness in this tender one.

in August's warm mist
.............................
in soft little sips

magic words.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) julie
So beautifully written, Julie and gorgeous presentation ...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie
Tiana

2 Years Ago

You are a wonderful poetess! Always a pleasure to read your lovely work :)
The kiss that never was, it's like never having closure.
Wondering what it would have felt like, and meant.
Would it have been for better? Or for worse?
Beautiful one Julie.

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words lovely lady :) Julie
Matching Socks

2 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
Unbelievable.. How do you do this every single time?. Your poems are so delicate, I am afraid of staring at them.. I am afraid my gaze would melt your words... Fantastic!! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

You are very sweet. Thank you :) Julie
The sky you paint with your words has an almost other-worldly quality Julie and its the perfect backdrop to the perfect kiss and that makes it all the more bitter-sweet that it isnt going to happen. Its such a dreamy write - I suppose the happy ending doesnt work out that often - even in poetry world.
I loved being there but - you write beautifully

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind comment and compliment :) Julie
Its never to late for a kiss my sweet. We could meet at mid night under a romantic moon.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment Jim :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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