Had The Sun Not Set

Had The Sun Not Set

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ would have, could have...should have? ~

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Yes, we would have kissed

if he had been mine…

 

In Augusts’ warm mist

when ripe on the vine

were strawberries sweet

and luscious to lips

just longing to meet

in soft little sips

 

The sun was a fire

through clouds of whip cream

‘til fervent desire

in a sky of dreams

faded into the mist

of twilights soft threat

 

Yes, we would have kissed

had the sun not set


© 2015 MsJewel



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The kiss that never happened, but was oh so wanted,
and more than likely by both.....

One never knows when the opportunity may arise again,
don't let it pass by without exploring the possibilities.

The softest expression
of love is felt
when wanting lips
together melt.

XOXO ;}
Trace

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Lay with me dear
upon the grass
lend me your lips
and I'll pinch your a*s...read more
Trace

2 Years Ago

Only if you are wearing your red heals and black dress



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Well this' a flawless jewel on velvet setting. That certainly can't be argued.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a lovely comment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie
This is a wonderful write on unrequited love. You are truly skilful at this type of poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
So very close to perfection is this skilfully composed poem. Delightful :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

You are very sweet. Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment :) Julie
Those chances not met will haunt us…

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Haunting...yes. :) Julie
Sensual magnificence pondering a kiss that would wait a life time. I always fall in love with you a little more whenever I read your work Julie.

Al

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Yours is possibly the sweetest comment I've ever received. Thank you :) Julie
why did the sun set........
beautiful poem!!!
loved it!!!
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you dear one! :) Julie
Pushkar Prabhat

2 Years Ago

you are welcome mam!!! :) :)
A missed chance, but a fine poem, as always. :) Rudi

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much Rudi :) julie
Too much, too little, too late? Your words flow so easily and are velvety soft....though filled with regret. A joy to read, Julie. Lydi**

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi! :) Julie
Another beautiful love poem, do love the ending line and the kind of ''left happiness'' that would of be,
I love the poem, Once again another masterpiece!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie
Library ? Of course, i need another shelf for you Julie, i don't know how you do it apart from being a brilliant poet of course but this is sublime, beautiful, stunning and gorgeous, to hell with the sunset let the kissing begin, thank you :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Your comments always leave me with a smile Richard. Thanks so much :) Julie
R Smith

2 Years Ago

you're always welcome :)

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Added on January 20, 2015
Last Updated on January 20, 2015
Tags: love, romance, kiss, regrets, memories, msjewel, poetry

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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