Had The Sun Not Set

~ would have, could have...should have? ~

photo compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

Yes, we would have kissed

if he had been mine…

 

In Augusts’ warm mist

when ripe on the vine

were strawberries sweet

and luscious to lips

just longing to meet

in soft little sips

 

The sun was a fire

through clouds of whip cream

‘til fervent desire

in a sky of dreams

faded into the mist

of twilights soft threat

 

Yes, we would have kissed

had the sun not set

Reviews

[Trace]

The kiss that never happened, but was oh so wanted,
and more than likely by both.....

One never knows when the opportunity may arise again,
don't let it pass by without exploring the possibilities.

The softest expression
of love is felt
when wanting lips
together melt.

XOXO ;}
Trace

[MsJewel]

Lay with me dear
upon the grass
lend me your lips
and I'll pinch your a*s...read moreLay with me dear
upon the grass
lend me your lips
and I'll pinch your a*s...
Ok...yours is prettier. Hugs, J

[Trace]

Only if you are wearing your red heals and black dress

[R Smith]

Library ? Of course, i need another shelf for you Julie, i don't know how you do it apart from being a brilliant poet of course but this is sublime, beautiful, stunning and gorgeous, to hell with the sunset let the kissing begin, thank you :)

[MsJewel]

Your comments always leave me with a smile Richard. Thanks so much :) Julie

[R Smith]

you're always welcome :)

[Olumegbon]

This is awesome, really impressed. I appreciate your writing. Professionally written. Thumbs up

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Ana B.]

Absolutelly fantastic writing! I fell in love with it rightaway.....amazing work!

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you Ana :) Julie

[wordman]

a sunset,a kiss strawberries what more are there to write
a beautiful write,a beautiful sunset

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[wordman]

you are welcome julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

We must take advantage of those beautiful moments that come our way or they wind up shadows of what ifs. Always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry.

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet cowboy. It's always a delight when you visit my page :) julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Always a pleasure to visit your poetry.

[onceloved]

A beautiful if, scibble in ways you are very talented at doing them, and how many of us have known a if in are life? And the sun set was use so beautifully with this one. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Larry. :) julie

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Larry. :) julie

[onceloved]

You are welcome my friend. Larry

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... your poem is a sensual expression
of desire as lovely as a painting that glows in
colors of love and devotion... truly a masterpiece.
Tenderly... Pat

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Pat. Hugs, Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

kissing in a strawberry shortcake sunset...scrumptious...

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob :) Julie

[Daydreamer]

WOW😍😍😍😍
Wonderful poetry,indeed!

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) julie