Had The Sun Not Set

Had The Sun Not Set

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ would have, could have...should have? ~

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photo compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

Yes, we would have kissed

if he had been mine…

 

In Augusts’ warm mist

when ripe on the vine

were strawberries sweet

and luscious to lips

just longing to meet

in soft little sips

 

The sun was a fire

through clouds of whip cream

‘til fervent desire

in a sky of dreams

faded into the mist

of twilights soft threat

 

Yes, we would have kissed

had the sun not set


© 2015 MsJewel



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The kiss that never happened, but was oh so wanted,
and more than likely by both.....

One never knows when the opportunity may arise again,
don't let it pass by without exploring the possibilities.

The softest expression
of love is felt
when wanting lips
together melt.

XOXO ;}
Trace

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Lay with me dear
upon the grass
lend me your lips
and I'll pinch your a*s...read more
Trace

2 Years Ago

Only if you are wearing your red heals and black dress



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This is awesome, really impressed. I appreciate your writing. Professionally written. Thumbs up

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Absolutelly fantastic writing! I fell in love with it rightaway.....amazing work!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you Ana :) Julie
a sunset,a kiss strawberries what more are there to write
a beautiful write,a beautiful sunset

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you Ron :) Julie
 wordman

2 Years Ago

you are welcome julie
We must take advantage of those beautiful moments that come our way or they wind up shadows of what ifs. Always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you sweet cowboy. It's always a delight when you visit my page :) julie
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

2 Years Ago

Always a pleasure to visit your poetry.
The kiss that never happened, but was oh so wanted,
and more than likely by both.....

One never knows when the opportunity may arise again,
don't let it pass by without exploring the possibilities.

The softest expression
of love is felt
when wanting lips
together melt.

XOXO ;}
Trace

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Lay with me dear
upon the grass
lend me your lips
and I'll pinch your a*s...read more
Trace

2 Years Ago

Only if you are wearing your red heals and black dress
A beautiful if, scibble in ways you are very talented at doing them, and how many of us have known a if in are life? And the sun set was use so beautifully with this one. :) Larry

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much Larry. :) julie
MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much Larry. :) julie
onceloved

2 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend. Larry
dear Julie... your poem is a sensual expression
of desire as lovely as a painting that glows in
colors of love and devotion... truly a masterpiece.
Tenderly... Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment Pat. Hugs, Julie
kissing in a strawberry shortcake sunset...scrumptious...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob :) Julie
WOW😍😍😍😍
Wonderful poetry,indeed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) julie
Beautiful wordings, I completely enjoyed it.
Nice job.

armin. ...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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