Gold

Gold

A Poem by MsJewel
"

~ a love poem ~

"

 

                          Love is the only gold….Lord Alfred Tennyson

 

               

                               art ~ Gold Diamond by Ron DiScenza

 

 

You wake me from my dreams as I glide

in shadows of the moon where I hide

I feel you reach for me, your embrace

lifts me to another time and place

 

Where you can feel my warmth, soft yet bold

as painted brilliance sweeps and unfolds

scenes created in light just for you

glistening in the pearls of morning dew

 

Weaving silken ribbons beauty flies

feel my touch, take my kiss as I rise

We are free, we are one, we are art

intertwined with each beat of my heart

 

Every breath taken, love, we will share

the beauty that is you I compare

to the sky shining bright, in your hold

I am dawn, the sunrise...I am gold

                                 

© 2015 MsJewel


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This one was quite magical.. it combined imagery and emotion..sensations... freeing the spirit and allowing it to get lost in the warming light of love.. shining gold like the treasure that it is.. I love it when an author can make me forget I am reading and transport me into another dimension, or state of awareness... you have done that exquisitely here Julie.. for one breathtaking moment, I felt the beat of your heart and it was stunning.. I loved this..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie



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amazingly written keep it up !

Posted 8 Years Ago


I could literally feel the sensation of warm skin in my palms and silk slipping through my fingers. This is such a smooth and romantic read. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I find a great emotion in this wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


MsJewel, another piece of beauty. I love it all, every single word. Thank you so much! Bravo. Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Dale :) Julie
Confuser

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. Beautiful writing.
Another brilliant work on ecstasy of togetherness. You have a distinct style.. Light, soft, beautiful, enamoring and enchanting at the same time, like a breeze.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love sun rise and sunsets and you've described it most deliciously very sweet

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words :) Julie
W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

your quite welcome
Where you can feel my warmth, soft yet bold
as painted brilliance sweeps and unfolds.

Really, not happens every time such magic as you have penned down there.
Amazing...............

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
A perfect quote and amazing poetry dear Poet. I agree. Without knowing love. What are we? Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) julie
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome Julie.
This one was quite magical.. it combined imagery and emotion..sensations... freeing the spirit and allowing it to get lost in the warming light of love.. shining gold like the treasure that it is.. I love it when an author can make me forget I am reading and transport me into another dimension, or state of awareness... you have done that exquisitely here Julie.. for one breathtaking moment, I felt the beat of your heart and it was stunning.. I loved this..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie
Beautiful...I am often mesmerized by the sunrise...I am now mesmerized by your poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

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Added on January 22, 2015
Last Updated on January 23, 2015
Tags: love, romance, sunrise, gold, msjewel, poetry

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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