This Night

This Night

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a sensual little scribble ~

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                This night…

 

Let there only be moonlight

and your breath upon my skin

painting my cheeks a fevered blush

my lips softening the crush of yours

 

Eyes veiled with wishes,

souls wrapped in beams of light

exposing every secret

whispered sweet….passionate sips

between love’s kiss

 

For nothing is hidden…nor forbidden

not the power of my fragility

as weakened in your strength

pressing us closer together

 

I catch my breath…you breathe me in

               

Hearts beating wild,

 like the dance of a windblown flame

 captured

                                                      this night

       

                                                we breathe us

 


© 2015 MsJewel



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I knew I was going to love this from reading the first two lines. So sensual and passionate, but not aggressive or uncouth. I love that you can convey such a sexy scene while still keeping it classy. Perfect poem for someone's bae on Valentine's Day! Amazing job

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Elisa :) Julie



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well as usual i'm all silly and weak kneed at the feet of your magic writing, so soft, so sensual and so damned hot, Julie order me a cold shower please!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

One cold shower for my sweet friend! Hugs, Julie
R Smith

2 Years Ago

a cold shower and hugs.....don't you think its good how i'm resisting the urge to comment lol
MsJewel

2 Years Ago

lol!
Eyes veiled with wishes,
souls wrapped in beams of light
exposing every secret
whispered sweet….passionate sips
between love’s kiss

Hot sexy and romantic… enough said.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you sweet Cowboy. It is always a treat when you visit my page. Hugs, Julie
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

2 Years Ago

Always a pleasure to read your words.
nothing more sensual than "breathing the we"
when it really feels as a we---in passion, heart and soul.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob :) Julie
"For nothing is hidden…nor forbidden
not the power of my fragility
as weakened in your strength
pressing us closer together"

So lovely, melodious and flaming with beauty. I love the usage of the power of fragility. Amazing...:)..................

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it sweet Sami. Thank you my dear friend :) Julie
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome. Any time...:)....
another sensuous, wistful, tantric read ;) .. you set a wonderful scene at the table of love :o
all of us who love and are loved need to be reminded how miraculous the connection as " we breathe us"
:)

E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
"For nothing is hidden…nor forbidden
not the power of my fragility
as weakened in your strength" - Julie this is amazingly clever - oxymoronic and wonderful writing.

" like the dance of a windblown flame
captured" - beautiful imagery

all told a magical poem - truly
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely review Anto. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie
ANTO

2 Years Ago

thank you Julie for the wonderful sentiment - :))
The night sounds romantic and filled with love in the air. Beautiful composition made me miss someone. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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