Alighting

Alighting

A Poem by MsJewel
"

~ I'll always be a spring girl ~

"

 

                                      richard johnson ~ morning blossoms

 

 

Pastel scents and vanilla clouds

and the breeze singing in the sweetest voice…

 

“Come to my window, love

awaken the wildflowers

       for all is new”

 

I run to feel the sun in my hair

the blush on my cheeks

warming my heart

stirring my soul

like a dove...

 

          alighting


© 2015 MsJewel



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Yes, you're all time 'spring girl'. I've figured that all out through your pages (earlier pages). Appreciate it. The poetry's written with the game of words. Liked how beautifully you compare clouds with "vanilla"; scents with "pastel" (its makes vivid imagery of pastel hues in mind); the shine of hair with "sun-rays"; blush of lips with "heart"... Really enjoyed reading this poetic art. Well written!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie



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amazingly written keep it up !!

Posted 1 Year Ago


A sensual lady
Filled with heart and soul

She is the perfect scent
the ultimate dove flying high
in freedom
and eternal love

so beautiful
like you are Julie

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

You are so sweet Nisreenaa. Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. :) Julie
Lingering Soul

2 Years Ago

My pleasure
truth :)
Yes, you're all time 'spring girl'. I've figured that all out through your pages (earlier pages). Appreciate it. The poetry's written with the game of words. Liked how beautifully you compare clouds with "vanilla"; scents with "pastel" (its makes vivid imagery of pastel hues in mind); the shine of hair with "sun-rays"; blush of lips with "heart"... Really enjoyed reading this poetic art. Well written!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie
Beautiful artwork and kind and gentle words.
“Come to my window, love
awaken the wildflowers
for all is new”
You create good vision and place. Thank you Julie for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Julie: Love your writing as always....so breathtaking....it makes me think more of the beauty of spring which seems so simple but the visions of your writing evoke so many changes, that are magnificent..love the print (I'm imagining oil)-goes perfectly...Thanks again...Dale

Posted 2 Years Ago


Huge smile...tender as always...a freshness abound :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


beautiful poem Julie, like a dove alighting its so graceful, you forever seem to outdo yourself with every write, bravo :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Love blossoming and lifting a wintery soul as nature gives us Spring rising from the frozen winter. Lovely.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I love the way you combine love and nature.. A delicate and beautiful combination. Fantastic :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Another very beautiful hallmark moment your poetry are so beautifully penned with they come from deep within you Julie.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you Larry :) Julie
onceloved

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Julie. :) Larry

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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