So Sudden and So Sweet

So Sudden and So Sweet

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a little love scribble ~

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art ~ Steve Hanks

 

 

Soft from the night and lovely for the day

I turn to you

as mist would rise towards the dawn

in mornings first glimpse of the sun

 

You touch me

as sunlight would touch a bed of roses,

so sudden and so sweet

 

And I am warmed by the beam of light

that could not play without the tenderness of your eyes

the joy of your spirit

 

I am yours…you are mine…

                                                       soft and lovely


© 2015 MsJewel



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dan
Julie, I watched a show on TV a long time ago that showed, using time-lapse photography, a rose as it began from a bud and then bloomed into full flower; I got the feeling that I was seeing something eerily similar as I read this lovely piece. You mention a 'mist,' while I recall dew drops on the buds as they opened. Such a serene and tranquil vision, love in full bloom. Outstanding imagery in use here. Bravo!! take care...dan

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Dan. Thanks so much :) Julie



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Jewel,

You celebrate the words of romance like a princess in the throngs of joys only song.

Regards,
Al

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
As always, beautiful and tender expressions

NOTES: “in [morning’s] first glimpse of the sun”

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much! :) Julie
MomzillaNC

2 Years Ago

yw :)
Profoundly romantic fare that virtually radiates loveliness.
The sensuality you create, Jewel, always seems to be more beautiful than gritty, more spiritual than carnal.
Sublime poetry most refreshing, most gratifying!

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely words :) Julie
You write some of the sexiest pieces my friend! I loved this one just like every other one I have read by you :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much Aaron :) Julie
dear Julie ... soft and tender is your pen...
"touching as sunlight would touch a bed of roses,
so sudden and sweet..." is a beautiful expression.
truly... Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you Pat :) Julie
Romance described in the beautiful metaphor of the rising morning sun and written in silk.

Posted 2 Years Ago


oh wow....just wow on the last line! fabulously written and as always nobody does love like you Julie.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend. I miss reading your gorgeous poetry. When are you going to start postin.. read more
I must admit, I suck at romance and this is just too damn good.
It lingers in my mind..
I decided after reading 'Silent Dawn' to read your pieces one at a time with appropriate intervals.
This is the second I've read and will be sticking to the regime to fully appreciate your efforts. The least I can do; there is again nothing to critique about again. I enjoyed this immensely, Julie.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

You are very kind. I'm thrilled you enjoy my romantic scribbles (as I call them). Thanks so much :).. read more
This is a lovely poem with which to greet the day. You have a very soft hand on many of your poems.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Beautiful artwork and words.
"You touch me
as sunlight would touch a bed of roses,
so sudden and so sweet"
I need your poetry. Give me motivation to be remember. Best poetry is for love and hope. Thank you Julie for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your always encouraging words :) Julie
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Julie.

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