Awaken Love

Awaken Love

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ an aubade ~ a morning love poem ~

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Awaken love, awaken me

the breeze is fresh with dew

in golden scents and running free

for me and love and you...

 

                       

 

Soft as a breath sweeping the day

with paradise divine

 as whispers tease and gently sway

the roses on the vine

and the lilies that stand so tall

against the blushing sky…

 

Let’s share a wish for winds to stall

and watch the bluebirds fly

 

Singing their songs of that and this

as light as pale winged tips

sailing in dreams of love and bliss

and when smooth honey lips…

 

sweeter than dew, or tears once wept

or petals in a sea

of lavender and violets

delight in the beauty

of all that’s you, your gentle charms

upon this warm breeze of

the rapture found within your arms

 

You’ll awaken me and love

 


© 2015 MsJewel



Author's Note

MsJewel
art ~ Gary Benfield
poetry ~ MsJewel

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What a delicious way to awaken, Julie, to the bliss of love and gentle charms … what man would not dream of such a poem composed to him from a poetic queen of romance?
I cannot answer that, because it most certainly is not me.

After reading this for the umpteenth time, I feel enveloped in sheer amoré from the poetical splendor of a thousand fireflies winking, warming me from inside my skin … it is truly a sensational Aubade, what else to say.

I have it tagged to read again, first thing tomorrow morning, as it should be to stir the day awake juuust right … thank you, Julie!
Okay, I'm smitten; … I admit it … what else to say! ⁓ Richard

(psst! I "loved" your face) ; )

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind and generous comment and compliment. I'm thrilled you enjoyed my aubade. :).. read more



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What a delicious way to awaken, Julie, to the bliss of love and gentle charms … what man would not dream of such a poem composed to him from a poetic queen of romance?
I cannot answer that, because it most certainly is not me.

After reading this for the umpteenth time, I feel enveloped in sheer amoré from the poetical splendor of a thousand fireflies winking, warming me from inside my skin … it is truly a sensational Aubade, what else to say.

I have it tagged to read again, first thing tomorrow morning, as it should be to stir the day awake juuust right … thank you, Julie!
Okay, I'm smitten; … I admit it … what else to say! ⁓ Richard

(psst! I "loved" your face) ; )

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind and generous comment and compliment. I'm thrilled you enjoyed my aubade. :).. read more
Very descriptive poem of love and charm and other beautiful things associated with love very nice imagery and flow

Bill

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you Bill :) Julie
W R Stowe

2 Years Ago

you're very welcome Julie

Bill
I like this piece and the picture It invoked a few thoughts in my mind as well


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Michael :) Julie
You awaken the senses in all its romantic dimensions.
Sorry, I deleted you review by mistake on Haunted closets. Touched the wrong button so to speak.
Excellent and flavorful...:)..................

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

That's ok Sami - thanks for the lovely review :) Julie
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome. ....:)......
wow!!!! Let me just say this one blew me away. Very captivating, now this are the poems that i love waking up to

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much Cassie :) Julie
I get perpetually lost in your words, Julie... you write the most romantic pieces that wrap the heart like a warm blanket... the art work, font style and colour, rhyme, and well-placed emphasis are skilfully used to create the atmosphere... we all want that wind to stall sometimes...well-done...love it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

You are very sweet. Thank you :) Julie
dear Julie... "in golden scents and running free... sweeter than dew, or tears once wept...
of lavender and violets... the rapture found within your arms". Your poetry is seductive as
a hummingbird sipping nectar or a baby suckling a mother's breast. truly, Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago


you charm me with your love potions of emotions from ocean to ocean Beauty in colors Lavender and violets and honey dew lips makes the love juice flow from lips to lips.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment Jim :) Julie
So much romance in one poem. Your heart is strong with love Julie and I adore this one.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Troy. Thanks so much :) Julie
This may well be the epitome of romance and song.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Ken :) Julie

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