Glistening

Glistening

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a romantic little scribble ~

"

     

                    art ~ garmash

 

 

His scent lingers on my skin

as soft as a veil morning dew

                                                     Glistening

           

When sunbeams are a whisper

and the day breathes roses

                   awakening the butterflies

                                        confetti wings fluttering

to the gentle joy of leftover dreams

 

As my mind wanders

back to the moonlit garden he so lovingly tended

 

When his eyes were as bright as sunlight on a stream

and his lips were a kiss of poetry on the breeze

                stealing my breath

                                       catching my skirt

weaving the night in satin stars

 

And I awaken too

surrounded with the essence

of roses and butterflies

                                     and his scent

 

as soft as morning dew

                               Glistening

 

                        

© 2015 MsJewel



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There is something about the painting, Julie, about the font, the color, the layout of your lines, the emotional lure and beauty that sweeps my senses up into your romantically enthralling moment, that I simply and sincerely love the enthralling sensations of.

Julie, my sensitive side seems drawn rather completely and deeply by every line and verse, but most of all to this:
"When his eyes were as bright as sunlight on a stream
and his lips were a kiss of poetry on the breeze
stealing my breath
catching my skirt
weaving the night in satin stars"

Goodness-ME!
Well, I'll close now, Julie, and thank you every-so warmly … on my way to another read.
Big hugs to you for sharing your excellent pen! ⁓ Richard

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Richard :) Julie
Richard

2 Years Ago

Kind words?
Well, you're welcome, Julie.



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You are such a romantic! Every line is dusted with dreams.

Posted 1 Year Ago


loves afterglow reminds me of the moonlight touching the shadows of our souls :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


There is something about the painting, Julie, about the font, the color, the layout of your lines, the emotional lure and beauty that sweeps my senses up into your romantically enthralling moment, that I simply and sincerely love the enthralling sensations of.

Julie, my sensitive side seems drawn rather completely and deeply by every line and verse, but most of all to this:
"When his eyes were as bright as sunlight on a stream
and his lips were a kiss of poetry on the breeze
stealing my breath
catching my skirt
weaving the night in satin stars"

Goodness-ME!
Well, I'll close now, Julie, and thank you every-so warmly … on my way to another read.
Big hugs to you for sharing your excellent pen! ⁓ Richard

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Richard :) Julie
Richard

2 Years Ago

Kind words?
Well, you're welcome, Julie.
utterly beautiful...i really enjoyed reading this...soft and sensual like a butterfly kiss...well done and thanks

Posted 2 Years Ago


well, you already know how i so love your romantic scribbles. am rather addicted to them. they truly speak directly to one's heart and deliver such amazing verbal passages. once again Julie, splendid poetry because it contains the honesty of real love.

sincerely, Mark

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

It's lovely to see you Mark. I've missed your gorgeous poetry. Thanks so much for your kind words.. read more
Mark Cotterman

2 Years Ago

tis always wonderful pleasure to read you,,,,,have a happy fourth weekend dear friend.
I wish i could wander down the corridors of your mind Julie, what an amazingly romantic place it must be where i could find such lines as,

When his eyes were as bright as sunlight on a stream
and his lips were a kiss of poetry on the breeze
stealing my breath
catching my skirt
weaving the night in satin stars

It must be a seventh heaven inside your head, ah! such bliss :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

You are very kind Richard. Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie
Loved the tones of this poem it just warms the heart written so smart.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you Jim :) Julie
You paint such a soft, sensual canvas of light... that warm, loving scent awakening your heart... and even nature becoming the mirror of your loving wonder. It is the kind of morning that makes life so worthwhile... so perfect.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely review :) Julie
Just beautiful Julie. Such a gentle and flowing piece that gives so much thought to the comfort of sharing our time with a much loved partner.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely words Troy :) Julie
Beautiful and gentle words led the reader to good places and thoughts. I enjoyed the complete poem dear Julie. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind and thoughtful words :) Julie
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Julie.

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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