The Blush

The Blush

A Poem by MsJewel
"

~ a little love scribble ~

"

 

art ~ Konstantin Razumo 

 

 

The Blush

 

I remember our very first touch

your beautiful lips, the blush

of pink so smooth and tastes so sweet

the exhilarating rush

as you took my kiss and now my heart

beats so much softer… still

you may keep the kiss for none since then

has left me such a thrill

 

A thrill I fear I cannot disguise

with pearls and silk in place

with just a look you see beyond

the blush upon my face

beneath the lace where passion flows

in feelings so surreal

as I long to drink from your sweetness

should another kiss you steal!

 

 


© 2015 MsJewel



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Your beautiful poem stirs memories of innocence and awakening for this old man. Anyone with a romantic bone in their body would have their first "kiss" flame re-ignite from your words.
Thank you for your beautiful words.
Richie b.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie



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Your beautiful poem stirs memories of innocence and awakening for this old man. Anyone with a romantic bone in their body would have their first "kiss" flame re-ignite from your words.
Thank you for your beautiful words.
Richie b.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
Very artfully presented, with the artwork, font selection, coloring, & flowing words to match your font. Your rhymes are so gentle, barely noticed, as the message takes center stage (my preferred priority). I had to re-read this line to get it right: "you may keep the kiss for none since then" . . . it looks like you never use commas, but this phrase could really use one. I like the many tactile descriptions that match the flowing nature of your writing style.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love that natural blush when a girl gives you. Gives clues to a hell lot of the things.

Posted 2 Years Ago


as usual...smooth as silk...

i like the end of this....reminds me of my favorite play...Romeo and Juliet---
"trespass sweetly urged, give me my sin again" that second kiss for them...

Posted 2 Years Ago


I've just said to someone that if I want my fix of lovely, gentle, romantic poetry I know where to come. And don't I just find somewhere else?

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank yuo for your kind words Ken :) Julie
that was a great romantic write...well done

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
You captured the moment so beautifully a moment of innocence was beautifully penned Julie. :) Larry

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your kind words Larry :) Julie
onceloved

2 Years Ago

You are more than welcome Julie, I would love to see another one you my friend. :) Larry
So lovely and well written. Fits the picture you chose as well. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Ah that first kiss....the perfect kiss...the one that stole your innocence. This was beautifully written Julie. The flow and softness to this was remarkable.



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment Troy :) Julie
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Gee
Beautifully written.........send my pity to the badass who was obviously bullied,violated as a youth an is now (attempting to be)the bully.Bless his little cotton socks!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

"Bless his little cotton socks"!!! I love it! Thanks for the smile this morning! :) Julie
Gee

2 Years Ago

My pleasure,he is one prick!!!

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MsJewel

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