The Blush

~ a little love scribble ~

 

art ~ Konstantin Razumo 

 

 

The Blush

 

I remember our very first touch

your beautiful lips, the blush

of pink so smooth and tastes so sweet

the exhilarating rush

as you took my kiss and now my heart

beats so much softer… still

you may keep the kiss for none since then

has left me such a thrill

 

A thrill I fear I cannot disguise

with pearls and silk in place

with just a look you see beyond

the blush upon my face

beneath the lace where passion flows

in feelings so surreal

as I long to drink from your sweetness

should another kiss you steal!

 

 

Reviews

[richieb]

Your beautiful poem stirs memories of innocence and awakening for this old man. Anyone with a romantic bone in their body would have their first "kiss" flame re-ignite from your words.
Thank you for your beautiful words.
Richie b.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Saddam]

Its great,
I mean a remarkable and memorable piece.
You just proving the first kiss.
I love it.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely review :) Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
we demand the kiss......
gorgeous romance.......
amazing poetry.......
i loved it!!!
:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my dear friend :) Julie

[Cherry Pepperweb]

A blush will always betray your feelings, but usually it's a good thing. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Cherry :) Julie

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I adore your romantic and sensual scribble so very much, Julie.. this is an exquisite write about a kiss that makes one think back to that first moment when lips meet... as usual, you aptly accompany your words with a delicious painting... well-done, my friend! - FT

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your always encouraging reviews :) Julie

[John Alexander McFadyen]

An amazingly simple and honest romantic write Julie. Full of sweetness and sensuality and the desire of complete love.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it John. Thank you :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my! first kiss, thrilling rush, treasured thoughts of valentines, one more if you please ... leaning in :))

pink blushing rushing oh my!! you know i love your stuff ;)

E.

[MsJewel]

Your reviews are always so encouraging. Thank you my dear friend :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

Sealed with a kiss and a blush. And above all the heart and pen of a great romantic poet....Absolutely gorgeous. ...

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly. ....:).....

[Richard🖌]

Picture, font, balance, and color set the mood in perfect moment to enthrall your fans, especially, following that last verse, so sweetly set-up by the first.
Though, somewhat unusual, I enjoy the grouping of your Unmetered Quatrains to present two verses, and your spot-on rhymes help highlight the sensual flow of well-selected words and their brilliant arrangements.

I most graciously thank you, Julie, for the genuine pleasure! ⁓ Richard

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem Richard. Thank you for your generous words :) Julie

[Richard🖌]

You bet, Julie!

[Adam Adams]

You prove that the remarkable memories of first love/kiss have always been the greatest reward to heart... even to the elixir of soothing spirit. Very possessive & passionate write you've come up with. Beautiful as well as very mischievous poetry it is. Enjoyed reading your words! ;)

[MsJewel]

Thank your for your kind words Adams :) Julie