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A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a collaboration by Trace and MsJewel ~

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 What you were looking for, and what you found in me, and what you see, is just the sun at dawn...Reinfried Marass

 

 

                

 

                    She is eternal youth

                rising with the sun…at dawn

                fresh as the morning light...

 

                Innocently floating upon the linen clouds

                towards a destination once unknown

                now captured in the moment of her being

 

                Like a poem

                written in satin scented script

                flowing with the love of whispers on the wind,

                      she is a melody,

                                          not to be held

                            but seized for an instant

                in the shadows of a recollection once forgotten

                           yet, never growing old

 

                She is eternal youth

                                        caught only in a memory

 


© 2015 MsJewel



Author's Note

MsJewel
photography ~ Reinfried Marass
poetry ~ Trace and MsJewel

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Ah, for me, this is the way we see ourselves. We are still in high school....aren't we? We are still 18 and we are still ready for anything.....unfortunately not true, but the way we see ourselves sometimes. Of course, I have a feeling this could be about your daughter. In any case, this is well written and the imagery is lovely. I liked the change in margins. Lydi**

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi :) Julie



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dear Julie and Trace... the memory of youth
is the halo we wear as we gather flowers in the
morning light... The dance of love will leave us
breathless as we swing and twirl into the music
of forever spring... Your poetry blends like the
sun setting across the ocean in shades of blushing
Roses... truly, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


beautiful poem julie,,very well written dear i liked it a lot.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Illusiveness caught in memory. I like it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sounds like a beautiful blessing for a youthful loving child.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thanks Jim :) Julie
Your satin scented script plays well in this peaceful romantic rune.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautiful imagery in this wonderfully composed poem! The ending is perfect!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely review :) Julie
Indra Neil

2 Years Ago

u r most welcome!
She is complete beauty
All gorgeous inside

I love your style
and your poem here is so fine

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you sweet lady! :) Julie
and what a memory it will be, superb duet as always Julie, as a writing couple you are beyond compare, i love the romance and the images i get when reading this are beautiful, long may your association as writer's continue :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you my dear friend :) Julie
Tis the sort of poem a reader wants to touch, just to see if the magic will rub off - even a little. This is a beautiful collaboration that proves the past really IS etched in the forever because of ... love.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your always encouraging comments Emma :) Julie

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