A Poem by MsJewel

~ a romantic little scribble ~


art ~ Karol Bak

It’s you that awakens


the stars in my eyes

the moon in my soul


as if the skies


have wrapped me in your love


satin sheets of night

my heart surrendered

to your dark and light


You awaken me

© 2015 MsJewel

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"the stars in my eyes//the moon in my soul" I love this description. It wraps your reader in a soft flow of love and happiness. It's a great analogy that sits and swirls in my mind. I'm not sure how you keep that soft romantic voice and tone write after write, but I always know where to find my warm fuzzies.

Posted 3 Years Ago

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3 Years Ago

Thank you for your very kind words :) Julie


A very nice piece.

Smooth flowing like a sigh of love on the wind.

Well written and with a very lovely picture.

Posted 2 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


2 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it :

Thank you :) Julie

Star factor four **** for excellent verses of fine poetry by a fine friend nice to be reading you again.

Posted 3 Years Ago

I read your profile. What do you mean you are not unique? I thought this was really different (in the best way).

Posted 3 Years Ago

Erotic and romantic, nice flow. Leaves you wondering what you will do now you have been awakened.

Posted 3 Years Ago

Lovely way to open one's eyes. The poem evokes a smoothly penned surrender.

Posted 3 Years Ago

I had to read this one after seeing the title. And how beautifully it confesses the enchantment that loving creates. I've known this awakening, and nothing on earth compares.

Posted 3 Years Ago

I miss you like crazy
Once we find someone that really makes us wake up
Otherwise we are asleep and life is passing by quickly
until we see that spark

Posted 3 Years Ago

Beautifully written my dear! A softly sensual rhyme scheme and of course a wonderful theme presented per your forte. ~Sharon

Posted 3 Years Ago

Romance par excellence............... and the poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago

I have said this before but seriously i can not read enough of your work Julie, another great piece.
Thank you for sharing.


Posted 3 Years Ago

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Added on August 25, 2015
Last Updated on August 25, 2015
Tags: love, romance, passion, msjewel, poetry



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