The Sweetest Sound

The Sweetest Sound

A Poem by MsJewel

~ a naughty but nice little love scribble ~



                                                          photograph compliments of pinterest


In the soft

                                 in the warm

truth and secrets lay exposed

and nothing dwells but love...

composed from the windfall

of two hearts beating

with the thrill of me

          under you


we revel in the sweet


Nirvana in my eyes


tangled in my thighs

passion dripping blissful love


a naked sigh upon your lips…

                                the sweetest sound

                                                  in the soft

                                                                                  in the warm


© 2016 MsJewel

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My favorite poetry is that which makes me smile,
And when I read your soft and sensual lines,
I can't help but feel those words working their magic on me.

It is always so good to read your wonderful poetry and to talk to you,

I have missed both terribly.

This is not just soft and warm,, it is dripping with passion and extremely HOT.

and I love it.

Thanks for sharing tonight.


Posted 2 Years Ago

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2 Years Ago


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Romantic, sweet and intimate with a dash of sexy. ;)

I loved this poem and I hold it in high regard. It's a Love poem injected with the correct amount of sexuality and intimacy and the title is perfect. It's about the adoring and devoted nature of Love and all of its related idiosyncrasies and how you can become a single entity when having sex when you have that emotional connection with that specific person. Sex is always better when you're in love with him or her. Even I, as a Man, find sex far more enjoyable when I love her.

All in all, this is a wondrously crafted and passionately visceral poem. The affectionate concept in this piece is quite effective. As much as I'm a mediocre poet when in regards to Love I can very well recognize when someone else is exceptional at it.

Damn good poem, Julie! I wish I had a woman that could express her Love to me like you can do with poetry. ;)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words. I'm thrilled you enjoyed my little scribble. :) Julie
An implication of wonderful things, things
that will give an unsighted man the vision of lovliness. An urge to paint, to illustrate, to tell the world of that feeling and the world sings back with the widest smile.
---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 2 Years Ago

Softly sensual.

'tangled in my thighs
passion dripping'

What can I say? :)

Posted 2 Years Ago

"in the soft in the warm" it doesn't get any better than that! Great work, a fabulous write.

Posted 2 Years Ago

mmmm so serene ... passions erupting implied ..the whole poem leaves me feeling that afterglow ... and wanting this and all parts of true love's expression .. ;) just lovely Ms. Jewel!

Posted 2 Years Ago

There aren't that many woman that can open themselves up for their audience, sharing their intimate thoughts for our enjoyment in such a way as this. I can almost smell your perfume. Thanks for sharing this erotically sumptuous poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago

"We Revel in the sweet"

I miss your work so much
A moment of passion is one to hold onto for life

Like every word here
Its precious ......

Posted 2 Years Ago

As always written so well:)
A little bit of spice in this beautiful piece,
just love your poetry, great image as well,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago

This is very beautiful. Excellent job!

Posted 2 Years Ago

So good to read your beautiful words again. So very romantic, with the right balance of naughty and nice.

Posted 2 Years Ago

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26 Reviews
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Added on April 28, 2016
Last Updated on April 29, 2016
Tags: romance, love, passion, sensual, msjewel, poetry



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